Bride's Baby [NOOK Book]

Doesn't end

This cannot be given a good review because there is no ending. It cuts off in the middle of the story. Many of the chapters start at a point that doesn't naturally flow from the previous.

31 out of 32 people found this review helpful.

Where's the end of the book?

I was enjoying this free ebook (I'm not in to Romance novels but this was cute) until I got to what seemed to be the end and it just cuts off. I can deal with the odd characters in place of proper puncuation, but it's not really fair to offer a free book and cut off the end.

21 out of 21 people found this review helpful.

it was okay

happen to be free, so i downloaded it. i feel like for the climax of the book, it didnt have a good ending. sort of abrupt. i dislike when you your into a book and you cant stop reading it b/c you wanna know how everything is going to end and it just ends all of a sudden.

19 out of 19 people found this review helpful.

happy love

i found this book a nice quick read somewhat predictable ending but still a fun read!

8 out of 9 people found this review helpful.

Great Romance

I'm not usually a reader of these short romances, but this one really caught me. The characters were interesting and had real depth. The plot kept me turning the pages and wishing I had more reading time to find out the next twist in the story.

5 out of 7 people found this review helpful.

Cute love story

To anyone who reads an earlier review that mentions lesbions and adultury and gets scared, let me just say, I don't know what they were talking about. This is a cute, mildly hot, love story.

3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

enjoyed reading

it was a cute fun book to read. i wouldn't have paid for it but it was good for being free

3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

=]

This book was pretty good! I really like the romance and description in this book. It was kinda boring and slow at first but after the first few chapters i didn't wanna put it down!

3 out of 4 people found this review helpful.

Good Read

This was a good book. I enjoyed reading it and really couldn't put my nook down. I have never read anything from Liz Fielding before but hope to find something else she wrote ANY SUGGESTIONS?

3 out of 4 people found this review helpful.

Typical Harlequin

When I read this it was exactly like I was expecting. Baby before marriage. Man and woman having a hard time admitting they like each other. Because it is so predictable I gave it 3 stars.

2 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

Such Potential, But In the End, A Let Down

Bride's Baby, by Liz Fielding, had such potential in its plot, but fell so short in the end due to a slow start, too short of a period for relationship development, poor editing and an abrupt ending. The concept was great, but I found myself re-writing the book in my head. Adding parts where the author didn't provide a segue. The book was choppy, and in several parts, I had to re-read the text just to be sure I hadn't missed something or read it incorrectly. The editing was atrocious. A simple read through or software spell checker would have caught most of the missing words or misspelled words.

The part at Longborne where the two main characters spend time together was nice - especially the scene sitting by the fire in the library - but it needs to be longer and more fleshed out if the characters are going to exchange credible "I love You"s in the end.

The discussion of the Steamtrain wedding theme was either too brief or too vague to get a visual. If you are going to go into detail about those kinds of things, make sure it is enough to give the reader a solid idea of what it looks like. Otherwise, it is superfluous material that only confuses the reader and takes up space in the book.

Overall, it could have been a great book, but I'm glad it was free.

2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

So slow...picked up about 2/3 of the way through!

I had to make myself finish reading this book. It was so slow that I couldn't concentrate. The main characters are introduced early on and the he leaves for 6 months so half of the story revolves around her work and her event planning business. When he comes back very late in the story the ending picks up but be prepared for the slow parts! I wouldn't have chosen to read this book having finished it.

2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

good book

Great read for the unknowing

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

BAD!!!!!!!!!

……………………………………………………………………………………………Cuts off in the middle dont get this book. If u wonf a book that cuts off then and olny then would i think its a good book. (DONT GET THIS BOOK)

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

ReadingBuff

Held true to Harlequin. The story line was interesting and
You just wanted to know how it ended, although the ending was carried out rather suddenly. I expected a little more detail, but still a good read.

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

Good but not great.

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More than 5 stars: A romance that sparkles right off the pages into the heart!

Liz Fielding's THE BRIDE'S BABY is a short romance that moves the heart with smiles, laughter, tenderness and emotion. Events manager Sylvie Smith's friend Candy left her friend with one huge mess! First she roped Sylvie into doing the planning for her wedding to the rich, powerful and handsome Tom McFarlane and then she walks out on the groom, the same groom who is now going over each event detail cost, line by line, with eyes glaring. Glares turn into sparks, an electric chemistry that neither Sylvie nor Tom can resist. Now months later, Celebrity magazine comes to her with a proposition to profile her company, as company that has planned some of the most talked about weddings. Design the wedding of dreams and let readers catch a glimpse of what she herself would choose. With a chance to promote all the local Wedding Fayre exhibitors with the benefits going to charity, Sylvie has others counting on her. Just when Sylvie thought she had put the past behind her, her worst nightmare comes true! Standing in her ancestral home, in walks the new owner --- Tom McFarlane to overlook the events.... no way will he not notice that Sylvie is pregnant! Sylvie might be able to design a perfect wedding for Celebrity magazine but what is a wedding without a groom? Can true love and serendipity provide what the best wedding planning cannot? Can broken hearts find love beyond even their wildest dreams? THE BRIDE'S BABY hooks the reader in from the first paragraph and never lets go. Liz Fielding's characterization and dynamic descriptions place the reader right there, next to Sylvie as she goes down the failed wedding receipt check list. Sylvie is a spunky, intelligent heroine with a heart of gold. The hero Tom is a powerful successful businessman, an Alpha male with a delightful wounded soul mix. From the beginning, the reader has empathy for him. This man knows how to really move a woman, body, heart and soul. THE BRIDE'S BABY writing sparkles with emotion and romance. Liz Fielding writes descriptions with beauty and precision. The reader easily visualizes the scenes and the emotions through the imagery itself. The decisive action of an article of clothing or a certain color reappearing make the story vibrant and alive. Liz Fielding writes memorable moments and action scenes packed with the perfect mix of concrete description and imagery that stay in the memory long after the reader places the book on a bookshelf. The plot of THE BRIDE'S BABY moves smoothly from energetic romantic conflict to moments of powerful chemistry between the hero and heroine, from conflict to heartwarming tenderness, with several wonderful surprises along the way. Heart-warming scenes in this romance reach out beyond the hero and heroine's story to the reader's heart. THE BRIDE'S BABY is a romance that a reader will want to share with friend's and family. THE BRIDE'S BABY is a wonderful short romance that awakens both the tender heart of the young girl and the deep emotions of the woman in a reader. A keeper!

1 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

Highly recommended

Very interesting and held my interest I could not read it fast enough

Heartwarming

Truly heartwarming You will enjoy

Im connfused

I like romance but i have heard there is sex and i kinda dont want to read books with sex in it, so thats why im connfused because if i get it i wonder if iwill like it,or will i regret geting it because of the sex. Could someone give me some helpful advice or help me make a decision on this book if you do i will