Claimed [NOOK Book]

Eh, okay

The storyline actually had great potential but this struck me more as a storyboard write up to see if the concept would work instead of a finished piece. If time were taken to flesh out the characters and add in some color then this could be the basis for a great series.

8 out of 9 people found this review helpful.

Liked the Story - would love to read more

This definitely could have been a longer and more in depth story. I really liked it and thought it ended way too soon!!! I'm hoping more will be written about the Lokoti Werewolves!!!

8 out of 12 people found this review helpful.

This is my kind of genre. I like books about shapeshifters and

This is my kind of genre. I like books about shapeshifters and vampires. This one is a good short story. I mean short like 200 pages. I read it in one sitting and fell in love with it. I liked the plot and loved the characters. I would highly recommened this book and I look forward to reading more from this author.

6 out of 7 people found this review helpful.

good book

I enjoyed the story, and for a free book, thought it was good.

6 out of 9 people found this review helpful.

great free read

This is a fabulous story. After going on a csmping trip with a rude boyfriend Jessica meets Flint and her life changes for the better. Find out how a city girl comes to love the woods of Alaska!

5 out of 11 people found this review helpful.

K

I love it! It was sooo good! Yes it used weird words and was fast but that was easy to over look! It was sooo cute! It was only 198 pages, i think everyone should read it!

3 out of 4 people found this review helpful.

I really did want to like it.

I wanted to like this story but I just couldn't. The writing was really rough and seems more like a rough draft than a published piece.

There was all that "I could smell it." That pulled me right out of the story and made me wonder why Flint was saying that. Then there's Jessica. My god, what an idiot!

I didn't like either of the main characters. Jessica was whiny and annoying and accepted things far too easily. Flint was smug and perfect - the only mistake he made was arriving a bit too late to catch a plane.

I did find the take on werewolves to be interesting, and I would give another story in this world a chance.

That said, this storybreallybcould use an editor's touch.

2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

VERY DESCRIPTIVE!

This book is fine i guess until they randomly have sex! It was like, this girl at a bar, a random alaskan buys her dinner, drives her to a hotel and tey "do it", like, DESCTIPTIVLY! I did not eveb finish this book for fear the rest of it did not turn into random sex splurges!

2 out of 5 people found this review helpful.

Love

I love how its wrote like a diary!

2 out of 4 people found this review helpful.

Really wanted to like this

I really wanted to like this as it seemed to have a decent storyline and a likeable hero/male lead but the female lead made it impossible. She's whines and "speaks" as if she's 14, not 29. Words like "whilst" (as well as a few others) were very distracting to the flow of the story. Its a shame that such a sexy and likable character like Flint was wasted with Jessica and silly writing.

2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

Only okay

When reading this book it read like a teenager had written it. The story line was okay but had no action. The main chacter came off as prissy and and had little personality. The main chacter was an "Oh pitty pretty little me" type. The author gave up in the end just to finish the story line. It wasn't a complete waste.

2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

Ugh!

I can not stand books written in first person. I like having a character to have a name and substance. Could not even get past first few pages.

2 out of 4 people found this review helpful.

Loved it !

I thought the story was great. It was a fun read. Highly recommended !

2 out of 4 people found this review helpful.

good?

The reveiws make it sound great but I really want to know if the one night stand scene it talks about in the summary is too descriptive? I'm only a teenager and just wanted to know...

1 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

I loved this one.

I really loved this story. It had a great plot and I really hope to see more like it from this Author.

1 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

Flint Riverclaw?

Stoopid name and and a poorly written story. "Eventuates?" Someone is giving their thesaurus a workout.@@

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

It's okay

It's a good story, but the writing needs a lot of work. Somebody should have taken the time to edit the book before publishing it. The story would be much better with corrected spelling and english, as well as some rearraingement to make it read better.

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

What story?

The dook fell flat no excitment..... it was meet have sex, but now ur my mate, & ur are having my baby! The story had no depth and no thrills.... consider urself warned

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

Anm

I liked started of write

1 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

Cute, but unrealistic (and not in the paranormal sense)..

This book had conflicting messages and the characterization of Jessica was not consistent. It will reveal some things in the plot so if you plan on reading it, be wary!
She's all woman-power but doesn't say anything when she needs food for her diabetes. Her one-night stand man comes to retrieve her and she just drops everything after arguing once. It was like no i'm not coming with you oh, you really are a wolf, okay i'll come. I would have liked to see more of a chase, more resistance, even if it was hurting her. Then the end of the book I just felt bad for the author. It was so rosy daisy and PLAIN that i'm like no way you're spending the end of the novel talking about remodeling the house for pages and pages on end..and why is that the first thing she thinks to do? It felt so evasive and rude. I would read it if you'd like to check out the "steamy" scenes but as for the rest...no.