Immortal (Gillian Shields' Immortal Series #1)

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Welcome to Wyldcliffe, the place that haunts my present, my past, and my future.

Wyldcliffe Abbey School for Young Ladies is elite, expensive, and unwelcoming. When Evie Johnson is torn from her home near the sea to become the newest scholarship student, strict teachers, snobbish students, and the oppressive atmosphere of Wyldcliffe leave her drowning in loneliness.

Evie's only lifeline is Sebastian, a mysterious and attractive young man she ...

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Overview

Welcome to Wyldcliffe, the place that haunts my present, my past, and my future.

Wyldcliffe Abbey School for Young Ladies is elite, expensive, and unwelcoming. When Evie Johnson is torn from her home near the sea to become the newest scholarship student, strict teachers, snobbish students, and the oppressive atmosphere of Wyldcliffe leave her drowning in loneliness.

Evie's only lifeline is Sebastian, a mysterious and attractive young man she meets by chance. As Evie's feelings for Sebastian blaze with each secret meeting, she begins to fear that he is hiding something about his past. And she is haunted by glimpses of a strange, ghostly girl—a girl who is so eerily like Evie she could be a sister. Evie is slowly drawn into a tangled web of past and present that she cannot control. As the extraordinary, elemental forces of Wyldcliffe rise up like the mighty sea, Evie is faced with an astounding truth about Sebastian, and her own incredible fate.

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Editorial Reviews

Publishers Weekly
Shields, author of the Mermaid S.O.S. series, takes a gothic turn in this absorbing romance. Upon her beloved grandmother's hospitalization, 16-year-old Evie is sent to one of England's most prestigious boarding schools, the Wyldcliffe Abbey School for Young Ladies, located amid gloomy moors (“Towers and battlements jutted up crazily to the sky.... It was as though I had blundered back into a bygone age”). Despite a meandering beginning, the story accelerates with the interlaced historical narrative of Lady Agnes, whose family built the abbey that has become the school. Evie's scholarship and the required chores that accompany it isolate her from her rich, snotty classmates, but life seems to improve when she meets the alluring Sebastian. Odd visions and fainting spells begin to plague Evie, and further investigation uncovers the dark truth about Sebastian. As Evie explores Wyldcliffe's twisted history, she navigates questions about love, life and betrayal. Though the ending is tinged with a modern girl-power supernatural twist, the fresh take on classic ghostly romances will leave readers hungry for more. Ages 12–up. (Aug.)
Children's Literature - Amanda MacGregor
When 16-year-old Evie Johnson enrolls at Wyldcliffe Abbey School for Young Ladies, she finds herself training for more than just her place in society. The eerie, Gothic school, set on England's shadowy moors, is staffed by cold and mysterious teachers and populated with rich, cruel classmates. Almost immediately, strange things begin to happen to Evie. She catches fleeting glances of an apparition who looks shockingly like herself, and suffers from nightmares, fainting spells, and visions of unknown people and places. When Evie falls for the intriguing and enigmatic Sebastian, her life becomes increasingly bizarre. With the help of her friends Sarah and Helen, Evie untangles the truth behind who Sebastian really is, as well as discovers her connection to Agnes Templeton, the daughter of the school's founders. Suddenly, Evie is fulfilling a predestined role, dealing with the magical power of the elements and a coven and trying to save both her future and her past. This supernatural mystery suffers from an exceedingly slow plot. There is little action and much of the middle of the story is repetitive (Evie goes off to meet the cryptic Sebastian, has strange visions, then does it all over again). The suspense never feels strong enough, especially as the reader is privy to Agnes Templeton's diary and can make all of the connections long before Evie is able to piece them together. Fans of paranormal romances may pick this up, but the poor pacing, the heavy-handed writing, and stilted dialogue will disappoint even the most indiscriminate of readers. Reviewer: Amanda MacGregor
VOYA - Alissa Lauzon
Sensible sixteen-year-old Evie Johnson did not believe in any of that paranormal "mumbo jumbo" until she arrived at Wyldcliffe Abbey School for Young Ladies. Everything about her new school is strange and uncomfortable to Evie until she meets Sebastian. Her secret late-night meetings with him give Evie something to look forward to each day and help her feel less alone. But the more time Evie spends with him, the more she realizes how little she knows about him. With the help of friends, Evie begins to uncoil the mystery surrounding not only Sebastian but also her mysterious connection to Agnes Templeton, the daughter of a previous owner of the house. The appealing cover and intriguing premise of this book is certain to capture the interest of teen readers—particularly fans of paranormal fiction. Unfortunately the plot is extremely predictable and is dragged down by awkward pacing. The beginning unfolds much too slowly and comes to a rushing and somewhat abrupt finish, leaving too many questions unanswered. The information provided through Agnes's journal entries provides too much foresight to readers who will know what is coming too far in advance of its revelation to Evie. Characters have little or no dimensional value and are difficult to care about in any meaningful fashion. Readers are expected to blindly accept many plot elements with scant to no explanation. Although there is a sequel planned, most readers will be left unsatisfied and will have not formed enough of a connection with Evie to really care what happens next. Reviewer: Alissa Lauzon
VOYA - Mary Boutet
What could have been a great romantic mystery novel is overshadowed by unrealistic and stilted dialogue and a too rapid pace that left me confused and unsatisfied. Major events seem to come out of nowhere with little set-up and relationships become intense and important too quickly. Evie loves Sebastian, but I don't know why. She had friends like Sarah and Helen who suddenly were as important to her as sisters. It was as if the author had all of the details in her head, but she forgot to explain what was going on and why. Things happened so quickly and with so little detail and dialogue that I was left saying "huh?" making it almost impossible to relate to Evie and the other characters. I wanted to be drawn in but the writing prevented me from doing so. Reviewer: Mary Boutet, Teen Reviewer
School Library Journal
Gr 7-10–Sensible Evie Johnson arrives alone to face her new life at the Wyldcliffe Abbey School for Young Ladies. Raised by her beloved grandmother, Evie never wanted to attend boarding school, especially one for spoiled rich girls. But Frankie has fallen gravely ill and Evie’s father is away in military service, so off to Wyldcliffe she goes. It is as horrible as Evie suspected it would be. The girls mistreat her, the headmistress is a nightmare, and she keeps seeing a girl who looks just like her. Evie’s only joy comes from her budding romance with elusive Sebastian, who tells her that he lives near the school. Why will he only meet her at night? What does he know about the mysteries surrounding the school? And who is that shadowy girl? Billed as the first in “a paranormal romance series,” this lightweight story is filled with romance, mystery, and suspense. The moors provide plenty of atmosphere and Wyldcliffe Abbey and its teachers are downright spooky.–Sharon Grover, Hedberg Public Library, Janesville, WI
Kirkus Reviews
Evie, a motherless and lonely scholarship student at the very posh Wyldcliffe Abbey School for Young Ladies somewhere on unspecified moors of England, pursues a furtive and resolutely chaste late-night romance with Sebastian, whose good looks, dark moods, manipulative behavior and anachronistic speech will remind readers of Twilight's Edward Cullen. The narrative alternates between the present and the Victorian diary of Lady Agnes Templeton, who is linked to both Sebastian and Evie. The diary reveals their connections to Agnes (to whom Evie bears a striking resemblance and whom she sees in visions), but only hints at the worst of Sebastian's secret. Naturally, good must battle evil, while Evie must confront her demons and emerge damaged but victorious. Two-dimensional characters, overheated dialogue and a mishmash of predictable plotting cribbed from Harry Potter, Lord of the Rings, Circle of Magic, Buffy the Vampire Slayer and Twilight yield a profoundly derivative reading experience. The door is left open for a sequel, but with so much worthwhile source material to read instead, readers will ask, why? (Fantasy. 12 & up)
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Product Details

  • ISBN-13: 9780061375804
  • Publisher: HarperCollins Publishers
  • Publication date: 8/4/2009
  • Series: Gillian Shields' Immortal Series , #1
  • Pages: 368
  • Sales rank: 337,888
  • Age range: 13 years
  • Product dimensions: 5.90 (w) x 8.30 (h) x 1.30 (d)

Meet the Author

Gillian Shields is the author of Immortal, Betrayal, and Eternal, the first books about the sisterhood of the Mystic Way, as well as many other books for young readers. She spent her childhood roaming over the Yorkshire moors and dreaming of the Brontë sisters. After studying in Cambridge, London, and Paris, she became a teacher. She has taught in a girls' boarding school and also in a drama school where it was rumored that the ghost of a young girl could be heard crying in the night. Gillian was inspired to write this series in celebration of the power of first love, the strength of female friendship, and the haunting mystery of the past.

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Immortal

Chapter One

I never wanted to go to boarding school. Hanging out with a crowd of rich kids in a swanky school was never on my wish list. I was content with my old life, in a keeping-myself-to-myself kind of way. Not happy, perhaps, but content. And then, one soft blue September day, my grandmother—Frankie—became seriously ill. She had never been Gran to me, only dearest Frankie, my surrogate mom, my best friend. I had stupidly expected her to go on unchanged forever. But no one is immortal, not even the people we love. And now Frankie was sick and I was forced to pack my bags for Wyldcliffe Abbey School for Young Ladies. Life really gives you a kick sometimes.

I was doing my best to think of it as a challenge.

The journey to Wyldcliffe seemed to last hours as the train headed north. I was traveling alone. Dad had wanted to come with me, but I'd convinced him that I would be okay going by myself. I knew he wanted to spend every possible moment of his leave with Frankie at the nursing home before he had to go back to his army posting overseas. So I told him I was quite capable of sitting on a train for a few hours without ending up on a missing persons poster.... Honestly, Dad, I'm sixteen now, not a child anymore.... It wasn't that difficult to persuade him.

The truth was that I guessed it would be easier saying good-bye to him at home. The last thing I wanted was for those snobby Wyldcliffe girls to see me sniveling as my dad drove away. No, there was going to be no "poor Evie" this time. I'd had enough of that over Mom. People whispering about me in the street. The pitying looks behind my back. It wasn'tgoing to be like that again. I was going to show them that I didn't need anyone. I was strong, as strong as the deep green ocean. No one at Wyldcliffe would ever see me cry.

I transferred to a sleepy local train just as it was beginning to get dark. We chugged through an unfamiliar landscape of sloping hills covered with bracken and heather. In the depths of my misery I felt a twinge of curiosity. When I was little, Frankie had told me stories about Wyldcliffe, which she had heard from her mother, stories about the wild moors and the lonely farms and the harsh northern skies. I had never seen the place, but now I was almost there. I put away my magazine and my headphones and peered out of the window into the dusk.

Half an hour later, the train pulled into a little station at the head of a deep, shadowed valley. As I heaved my bags into a beat-up old taxi, a gust of wind whipped up a spatter of rain. I said, "Wyldcliffe, please," and we set off. I tried to make conversation with the bleary-eyed taxi driver, but he barely grunted in reply. We drove on in silence.

Between the clouds, I caught sight of the sun slipping behind the moors like a streak of blood. The leaden sky seemed to press down heavily on the land. I had lived all my life next to the open sea, and those dark hills made me feel strangely hemmed in. For all my brave talk, I suddenly felt very small and alone. How stupid I'd been not to let Dad come.... Then the car turned a corner, and the church tower and gray stone buildings of Wyldcliffe village finally came into sight.

The driver pulled up outside a tiny general store on the rain-blackened street. "Where to, then?" he growled.

"The Abbey," I replied. "You know, Wyldcliffe Abbey School."

He twisted his head around and glared at me. "I'll not take you to that cursed place," he spat. "You can get out and walk."

"Oh, but—" I protested. "I don't know where it is. And it's raining."

The man seemed to hesitate, but then he grunted again. "It's not so far to walk. Knock on the door of Jones's shop, if you like. He'll drive you, but I won't."

He got out of the car and dropped my suitcases onto the wet pavement. I scrambled after him. "But where's the school? Where do I go?"

"The Abbey is yonder," he said, pointing reluctantly to the church. "No more than half a mile from the graveyard. Tell Dan Jones that's where you're headed."

A second later his car roared out of the village, leaving me behind like an unwanted package. I couldn't believe that he had just dumped me there in the pouring rain. I knocked furiously on the door of the little shop, where the sign read, D. JONES, WYLDCLIFFE STORE AND POST OFFICE. There was no answer. It was a late, wet Sunday evening, and the whole village seemed to be shut down for the night. I swore under my breath. There was no choice but to walk.

Immortal. Copyright © by Gillian Shields. Reprinted by permission of HarperCollins Publishers, Inc. All rights reserved. Available now wherever books are sold.
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  • Posted August 1, 2009

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    Unfortunately not a great read.

    I have to be honest, this isn't a book that I enjoyed. I think it was trying to be too many different things at the same time. Is it a love story? Is it a mystery? Is it a fantasy story riddled with mysticism and evil covens that need to be destroyed? None of the themes are explored and the plot rushes through what should be longer, more processed elements of the story. The love element has no conviction, and the fantasy seems almost like an afterthought. This really should have been two different books. One where Evie discovers a strong kindred with this girl in the past while falling in love with this dangerous stranger, and another where Evie's powers are awakened and she joins a coven of girls with magical elemental powers and they fight the evil coven. Either that or it should have been longer in order to flush out the story.

    Also, a quick word of clarification, the novel advertises itself as dealing with mysticism, but it's very clear that this is Wiccan, and not the love the forest and the trees sort. This is the coven of witches who kidnap girls and murder them to keep their coven master alive sort. Simply put, the 'magic' isn't fun like many fantasy books. This is secret society of evil people sort of magic based much more in literal beliefs than what one would find in Harry Potter or Twilight.

    -Lindsey Miller, www.lindseyslibrary.com

    17 out of 33 people found this review helpful.

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  • Posted April 29, 2009

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    Utterly wonderful. Absorbing and moving.

    The publisher's synopsis is very accurate but does not fully do justice to the beautifully woven story-line; the depth of the characters and the evocative period, mood and cadence of the story. A friend lent me her advance copy she had been asked to read and she was wildly insistent that I read the book, too. Now I know why. The only thing that could spoil this wonderful book for me is if there isn't a sequel. And soon.

    The writing, which is highly accessible, quickly immerses the reader into the word of Evie and the challenges she faces. To go into these in detail risks spoiling the story for would be readers (and you should be one!) but suffice to say I just could not put the book down. It excited, moved, and transfixed me all at the same time.

    17 out of 19 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted July 30, 2009

    Wow

    When i first saw the cover it called to i just know it was going to be good but when i finished reading it i said wow such amaizing characters and wonderful story i hope theres a sequel

    9 out of 10 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted September 6, 2009

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    Immortal Maybe better than Twilight

    *scream* I loveeeeeeee this book. So far Its my favorite. Filled with suspense and tragic happenings prepared to fall into the world of love,faith,courage,magic, and a life threatening decision. When I finished the book I practically started to cry. I was so angry cause I had finished it and because there wasnt a sequel...yet. I had never wanted it to end. I have been on my computer for an hour just to find Gillian Shields's email, i foud it but the website said I had to pay to get it so i still dont know it. Read this book or you shall never forgive your self and will enjoy not 1 more book. You will ask your self "What the heck is wrong with me?Why didn't I read Immortal!!!" So thats the all I got to say about the magically tragic book "Immortal"

    8 out of 8 people found this review helpful.

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  • Posted August 10, 2009

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    Three cheers!

    I absolutely loved this book! From the very beginning the author has this wonderful story laid out for us and as you read along you could slowly see the mystery unfold before you. The romance aspect of it was undeniably sweet. I can't see why anyone wouldn't want to read this book. It's just that good!

    7 out of 9 people found this review helpful.

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  • Posted November 6, 2009

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    Reviewed by Jaglvr for TeensReadToo.com

    Evie Johnson's life can't possibly get any worse. Her beloved grandmother has taken ill. She has been living with her while her father has been serving in the military. But now, she can't go with her father, her mother is dead, and her grandmother is in a home. So with a little-known scholarship, Evie finds herself sent off to the Wyldcliffe Abbey School for Young Ladies out in the moors. Evie grew up by the sea, and she can't imagine what it will be like so far removed from the water she loves.

    She has to take the train to the school, and the cab driver refuses to take her all the way to the school, calling it a cursed place. In the dark cold rain, Evie struggles with her bags through the trees to the school. It's in the trees that she is hit by a dark brooding boy on horseback. She's tired, dirty, and is distraught to find her mother's photo frame broken on the ground. The mysterious boy helps gather her belongings and murmurs he will see her again.

    When Evie sets her picture frame beside her bed, she's surprised to find that it's in one piece, the glass not broken at all. She begins to believe she imagined the encounter and the strange boy, but then she notices the gash on her hand, from a piece of the previously broken glass. This begins her first night at the school. And things do not get better for Evie.

    She's taunted by one of her roommates, Celeste. Evie's place at the school is due to the mysterious death of Celeste's best friend. And as part of being a scholarship student, Evie must help crazy Helen Black with some of the chores after dinner. The only bright spot is the friendly gesture by one other girl, Sarah.

    The mysterious boy returns, and soon Evie finds herself sneaking out after hours to meet Sebastian. He gives little information about what he does during the day, and Evie makes many requests to have him call properly at the school. The more mysterious Sebastian seems, the more intrigued Evie becomes. When Helen starts to watch over Evie and get her in trouble for sneaking out, hints of stories told to Evie by her grandmother start to make more sense.

    IMMORTAL is an intriguing and dark tale that intertwines the past and the present. With glimpses into the past through a character's diary entries, Evie learns who she is and what she must do to survive and protect those around her. The story captures the reader from the first page and draws them in until the final one. There was so much mystery as well as romance throughout the entire story that it should appeal to a large audience.

    6 out of 6 people found this review helpful.

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  • Posted August 9, 2009

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    EXTREMELY AWESOME

    I cant believe anyone has ever doubted this book! It is so amazingly written and thrilling!I LOVED iIT. Dont you DARE not read this book. You will REGRET it!

    6 out of 8 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted January 11, 2010

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    "Immortal" is a winner

    I was a little iffy with the book when I read the discription, but once I started reading it, all those doubts went away. It was Thrilling, exciting, suspenseful, a page-turner, and I don't even love reading. But hands down, my favorite part was the characters which were discribed amazingly and so intense and thoughtful and amazing. My only negative comment is the ending. Personally I was disappointed with that ending, but I can't take away credit for that one little negative area of the entire amazing woven mystery of secrets. Incredible! You'll regret not reading it!

    4 out of 4 people found this review helpful.

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  • Posted August 28, 2009

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    when is the sequel coming out? I can't wati!

    This story had me so intrigued and I had to finish it in one sitting. I can't wait for the next book and a book about Sebastiana and Abbey would be nice. There are so many stories within this story and the possibilibies make me so giddy! I love the storyline and the simple way it was brought out. It wasn't tarnished by too much supernatural and brought out a realistic twist to it.

    4 out of 4 people found this review helpful.

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  • Posted August 21, 2009

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    left me wanting more

    i read this in 2 days.... mainly because i forgot it at work on my desk. it was a good story and for an english author i was surprised they didn't try to use so much slang that you needed an english to english dictionary like so many to try to do. it was a great read just for fun. i was left wanting more wanting to hear how and if they end up together. with a book ending like this i do think they should give you something to hope for or at least look forward to because sadly i'm likely to forget to look for another in a series like this.

    4 out of 4 people found this review helpful.

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  • Posted February 14, 2011

    An Interesting Story

    The first thing that attracted me to this book was the cover, the blues are very eye catching. The second thing was the book description that this included a Gothic mansion (I'm a sucker for old mansions and homes, and anything Victorian and Gothic).

    Evie is "shipped" off to an all-girl private school and not by choice. Evie's father has to leave and her grandmother can no longer take care of her. From the moment she is dropped off at the gate to the school, by the taxi driver who refuses to take her up to the school doors, strange things start to happen. First, she meets a mysterious guy, Sebastian, riding on a horse; little does she know that Sebastian is going to turn her world upside down wether she likes it or not. She is further met with more strange things when she starts to have "visions" at Wyldcliffe. One of Evie's escapes comes to be Sebastian, who also becomes the person that puts her in danger.

    Evie discovers a connection between Sebastian and all the strange things that are happening at Wyldcliffe. The question is, can she trust Sebastian even though she loves him, and does he love her in the right way, or will his love put her in more danger?

    While I overall enjoyed this book there were a few things that I did not. There were too many plots going on all at once - it got confusing at times as to what exactly was going and which plot was more important than the other. Also, the love between Evie and Sebastian didn't feel concrete enough, it wasn't completely believable - there was no development or build up to it, and it just seemed to have happened. I also wish there had been more diary entries - to get a more consise understanding of the past, maybe that will be included more in the sequel...

    3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

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  • Posted January 24, 2010

    Over-all a Good book

    I got this for Christmas I finished it that day and I really liked it! But the one thing I found was that it was a bit predictable.. but I think it was good book, and it was written very well. I would recommend this book. :)

    3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

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  • Posted August 18, 2009

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    It is fine to read but I wouldn't recommend it.

    First of all, I want to say that this book, like other readers said, tries to be too many thing and in the end it got stuck in the middle. It doesn't belong to the romance section since the love between Evie and S. happens too fast. I don't even know why they are so deeply in love after several meetings. It is too forceful and quick and the conversation they exchange during those meetings are so childish, it doesn't really spark any chemistry to make me feel the romance between them. (Maybe it's just me, I don't know)

    The book really really leaves me unsatisfied at the end since in the end the conflict didn't really resolved. I feell like nothing has really in resolved. Sebastine is still fading and Mrs. Hartle is still lurking out there. What happens to her followers? What happen to the dead Agnes? Did she move on? And in the end, Evie still could not unlock the necklace secret? so WHAT had she really accomplished?

    The plot is a bit predictable, too. I knew at the beginning that Evie and Agnes are related. But what disturbed me was Agnes's husband. It was so random. I felt like he was just...there just so that she could have a baby with him so there could be a story. (maybe I was just being difficult, which I always am.) And there's the guy named Josh that speaks for like, 2 sentences at the almost end of the book. and I don't even why he's in there. He doesn't help the plot or anything. I hope the author gives him an important role in the next book. (I hope there's sequel or I'll be extremely unsatisfied)

    Even so I have to say that this book has some really good moments. I like the way the author describe the surrounding for each new scene. I could even imagine it in my mind and trust me, I'm not a very imaginative person.

    3 out of 5 people found this review helpful.

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  • Posted October 29, 2011

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    Expected More

    : Immortal by Gillian Shields is filled with HEAVY undertones of the Bronte sister's. When I began reading immortal I was instantly drawn into the story. I have to admit I wanted to like the book, especially because so much of it seems inspired by the classics. I found an abundance of beautiful imagery through out the text that reminded me of the moors in Wuthering Heights. Sebastian is conveniently named Sebastian James Fairfax. Does the last name sound familiar? It's from Charlotte Bronte's Jane Eyre, think Edward Fairfax Rochester! Personally, I adored Sebastian's brooding attitude and the way Shields describes him simply as a rider on a black horse in the beginning of the novel. There are so many qualities that I loved about this book but unfortunately the story starts to go downhill midway through. First, although Agnes' journal entries were interesting, it was painstakingly obvious that the S. that she refers to in her journal, is Sebastian. It was sort of aggravating waiting for Evie to realize it too. Second, I didn't like the multiple pov's. It was distracting. The ending did not do the rest of the book justice. It just seemed off balance. To be honest besides the fact that I haven't heard good news about book 2 & 3, i'm not sure if I want to keep reading the series anyway. I think Shields is a great writer and her story is definitely interesting, but I felt that the ending wasn't strong enough to keep me interested. I'm a bit disappointed because I was loving the style of a gothic romance.

    2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

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  • Posted April 14, 2010

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    Do not recommend!

    I got this book thinking it would be good. I read some of the page barnes and noble.com let me read and it sounded so interesting I just had to read it. When I got the book I began reading at once and when I finished I was really disappointed. The whole story line and plot is rushed. The author is leading you up to something, so you expect something big to happen. But really it was nothing. it leads you on just to find disappointment. I do not recommend this book, and hope this helps some people:)

    2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

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  • Posted December 21, 2009

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    Amazing Story!!!

    I Thought this book was Great! At first I thought the book was going to be about how Evie found out that Sebastian was immortal because he was a mythical creature. WRONG! During the quest to find out the truth about Sebastian she finds herself intertwined with a Talisman, a ghost, a dark coven, and forbidden love, all leading up too....Immortal

    2 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted October 27, 2009

    Good Book

    This was an awesome story and could be turned into a series if the author so wishes. For anyone whol like the Twilight series this is also a good back. Although it does not deal with vampires the characters are young and torn in two because of a love that cannot be. This was an awesome book and a hghly recommend it and hope the author comes out with more of this type of fiction.

    2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

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  • Posted September 25, 2009

    Surprisingly Good

    I didn't think this book would be very good, but I was pleasantly surprised. I enjoyed the plot and the characters were good. Could have been longer to flesh it outsome more. The romance aspect of it wasn't very convincing or moving. Reminded me a little of Great and Terrible Beauty series, but not as good. I read Shiver right before this and actually preferred this book. Shiver was boring.

    2 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted December 3, 2009

    mmmm,

    This book was so amazing!
    FAVORITE

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  • Posted October 5, 2009

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    Loved It ~ Looking forward to sequel

    Fantastic Story. Could not put it down.
    Will pre-order sequel when it is available!

    A definite great read~~~

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