Lost Voices (Lost Voices Trilogy Series #1)

Lost Voices (Lost Voices Trilogy Series #1)

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by Sarah Porter
     
 

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Fourteen-year-old Luce reaches the depths of despair when she is assaulted and left on
the cliffs outside of her grim, gray Alaskan fishing village. She expects to die when she
tumbles into the icy waves below, but instead undergoes an astonishing transformation
and becomes a mermaid.
A tribe of mermaids finds Luce and welcomes her in—all of them,

Overview

Fourteen-year-old Luce reaches the depths of despair when she is assaulted and left on
the cliffs outside of her grim, gray Alaskan fishing village. She expects to die when she
tumbles into the icy waves below, but instead undergoes an astonishing transformation
and becomes a mermaid.
A tribe of mermaids finds Luce and welcomes her in—all of them, like her, lost
girls who surrendered their humanity in the darkest moments of their lives. Luce is
thrilled with her new life until she discovers the catch: the mermaids feel an uncontrollable
desire to drown seafarers, using their enchanted voices to lure ships into the
rocks. Will Luce be pressured into committing mass murder?

Editorial Reviews

From the Publisher
"A haunting debut. . . . Porter’s writing is expressive and graceful. . . . . a captivatingly different story."
Booklist
"A beautifully written and heartbreaking story about a lost soul struggling to forgive the people she loved who wronged her, and ultimately to forgive herself."—Jennifer Echols, author of Going Too Far
 
"It might be shelved as a fantasy, but Lost Voices is full of gripping, harsh realism. Without resorting to stereotypes or tired high school plots, it deals with the complications of friendship and peer pressure. And at its core, it's nothing more than a really believable, understandable and relatable story about finding one's voice. Its relevance to real life and its references to the real issues that create lost girls --- abuse, neglect, rape, bad parenting and more--make it a one-of-a-kind mermaid story. For that reason, it will appeal to paranormal, fantasy and realism fans alike."--teenreads.com
 
"This is a dark and compelling take on a world usually depicted as more lighthearted. . . . Porter nonetheless carefully doles out enough possibilities to keep the overall tone hopeful, and given the already numerous perky mermaids, these gritty, wounded souls are a creative and welcome addition to the field."--Bulletin
 
"The beautifully crafted first book of the Lost Voices trilogy is told in such a rich, despairing aqua tinged tone, it leaves you desperate for more."--Fantasy Book Review
Publishers Weekly
In debut novelist Porter's bleak take on mermaids, first in a trilogy, the creatures are born out of human abuse and neglect. Luce is an unwanted orphan, living with her alcoholic uncle on the Alaska coast. When he tries to rape her, Luce simply gives up and slides away, falling off a cliff. She awakens singing in the ocean, watching strangers drown as a ship sinks. There are other singers nearby, who bully Luce, answer her questions, and welcome her in a way her peers on land never did. A mermaid's life turns out to be even more brutal than the one Luce left, but now the brutality is directed elsewhere—at humankind. Still, Luce's conscience rebels, and she seeks some way to resolve the beauty of a mermaid's song with the horror of a siren's role. Porter's narrative style suits her oceanic theme; the vivid colors and particularities of life are smoothed away to plain clarity. Luce thinks about her world in ways that read much younger than her 14 years, but the simplicity of the style makes the darkness of the story more tolerable. Ages 12–up. (July)
Children's Literature - Judy Crowder
Land vs. sea, real vs. ideal, compassion vs. selfishness are some of the contrasts that eighth-grader Luce (Lucette) must face in Porter's compelling first novel. Luce's world is far from ideal. Her mother is dead. Her father, a con man-grifter but loving parent, is her whole world which is lived in seedy motel rooms and their red van. Things change when they move in with her father's brother in Alaska, but hardly for the better. Luce's dad dies in a fishing accident, leaving her to live with Uncle Peter, a mean drunk who makes increasingly inappropriate moves toward his niece, and Luce can't begin to fit in at her school. One desperate night, she falls over the cliffs into the sea. Does she die? No—Luce is transformed into a mermaid, more capable and beautiful than she was when human. There, in the frigid water, she is befriended by a group of mermaids, especially their queen, beautiful, brittle Catarina. Two discoveries change Luce's life. One, all mermaids were once human and suffered terrible abuse. Two, her remarkable singing voice excels above all others; eventually she can make even the waves obey her. But the mermaids' great joy and purpose are to sing ships to crash and sailors to drown. Horrified, Luce feels pressured to help in the carnage and chaos. Then another mermaid joins the group. Anais, who is self-absorbed, greedy and cruel, manages to ruin everything. Will Luce be able to survive in her new world? Will she face the same fears and problems she encountered on land? Porter should be applauded for a brilliant first novel. Her writing moves right along, drawing the reader in with suspense. The watery world holds new dangers, with bullies as cruel as any earthly middle or high school "popular crowd," making it easy for the reader to identify with Luce's world. Well-recommended! Reviewer: Judy Crowder
Library Journal
This first installment in a trilogy by debut author Porter tells the story of 14-year-old Luce, who after a horrific event transforms into a mermaid and finds an unusual home with a tribe of other mermaids. This, however, is not the Disney version of a mermaid's tale. It paints a darker picture of these alluring creatures, where young women become sea nymphs after suffering unspeakable tragedies and then lure humans to their death with their haunting voices. Luce discovers that she now has strength, beauty, and an extraordinary voice but, despite her horrible past, dislikes using her newfound talents for harm. Julia Wheelan successfully narrates an entire cast of characters, from the strong Queen Catarina to the self-absorbed Anaise. This audiobook will appeal to older teens and Twilight fans looking for a change from vampires and werewolves.—Theresa Horn, St. Joseph Cty. P.L., South Bend, IN
School Library Journal
Gr 6–9—Luce, 14, wants to just disappear. After her swindling father's boat vanishes, she is forced to move in with her abusive, alcoholic uncle in an Alaskan fishing town. One day he attacks her atop a tall cliff. In her desperation to flee, she is sent tumbling down into the ocean below. What surely should have meant death is actually a rebirth, as Luce is magically transformed into a mermaid and taken in by several mermaids residing nearby. Luce, who has never had any real friends, befriends them, learning that the tribe is made up of girls just like her; they have all been abused in some way. After adjusting to her new world, Luce is overwhelmed with the love she feels—until she learns that her friends use their powerful voices to lure passing ships into the rocks, killing everyone onboard. She is appalled but if she doesn't subscribe to their practices and their abhorrence of humans, she may be banished, sent out into the dangerous ocean on her own. When a new mermaid joins the group and grossly shifts the tribe's dynamics, though, Luce's character is truly tested. For the first book in a slated trilogy, Porter does a nice job of painting Luce's emotions and the dynamics within the tribe. The description of how the girls transform is hazy at best and must be overlooked to enjoy the story that takes place under the sea. The book should be enjoyed by those who dream of becoming someone (or something) else.—Lauren Newman, Northern Burlington County Regional Middle School, Columbus, NJ
Kirkus Reviews

On her 14th birthday, Luce enters a dark world of mermaids in this foreboding yet ultimately uneventful debut.

After a life of thievery on the road, her single dad tried to give her normalcy by settling down and taking a fishing job in an Alaskan coastal village. Since his boat disappeared a year ago, Luce has been living with her violent, alcoholic uncle. When he tries to rape her, Luce liquefies, reforms as a mermaid and is taken in by a group of cliquish mermaids, who were all mistreated girls as humans. Reminiscent of Kevin Brooks, Porter blends lyrical narration with the ever-present threat of sinister violence. Like The Odyssey's Sirens, these mermaids, led by their queen, Catarina, use their voices to lure ships to destruction and their passengers to death. Equally fascinated and repulsed by the process, Luce, a naturally gifted singer bound by the mermaids' code of honor, tries to think of a way to turn their voices from tools of evil into beauty. Adding to her dilemma are Catarina's insecurities and secret compromises to the mermaid code and the arrival of the once-spoiled and wealthy Anais, who tries to usurp Catarina's power. The real problem is that Luce takes too long to find her own voice and the tension wears thin.

A sudden ending to this slow-paced story will leave readers floundering. (Fantasy. 12 & up)

Product Details

ISBN-13:
9780547482538
Publisher:
Houghton Mifflin Harcourt
Publication date:
05/01/2012
Series:
Lost Voices Trilogy Series, #1
Pages:
309
Sales rank:
269,289
Product dimensions:
5.56(w) x 8.02(h) x 0.82(d)
Age Range:
12 Years

Meet the Author

Sarah Porter is the author Lost Voices, Waking Storms, and The Twice Lost. She is also an artist and a freelance public school teacher. Sarah and her husband live in Brooklyn, New York. Visit Sarah’s Watery Den online at www.sarahporterbooks.com.

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ReadergirlReviews More than 1 year ago
It was the gorgeous cover that first drew me to this book, as well as the premise of girls turning into mermaids, but be warned. These are not your Disney mermaids. This book was raw, emotional, disturbing, and sad. It was also lovely. I've always been intrigued by mermaids. Not the cutesy Little Mermaid variety, but the old myths about beautiful sea creatures who gorgeous siren songs lured fisherman and other men to their deaths. I always wondered why a creature's purpose would be just to lure people into drowning or hurling themselves from their boats, and Sarah Porter explains it well. The idea that these once girls now mermaids sing their song because it gives them immensely beautiful feelings, and that they've been so abused by humans that they want to destroy them for their actions is both sad and disturbing. Luce is the sole exception, as she still remembers people that she loved. Her new persona doesn't quite take hold completely, which allows her to maintain some of her humanity that the others have completely lost. I found myself completely overcome when I read about the larvae, or small baby mermaids. The idea that babies could have been so abused by humans that this would happen to them too made my heart hurt. With the way the story ended, I would like to say there is going to be a sequel, especially since this book didn't really have a concrete ending like what I would expect. It seemed to just end. Bottom line, this book was excellent but disturbing. I'm glad that I read it, and definitely think we have an author here with some amazing talent that I can't wait to see more of.
Jennifer Johnson More than 1 year ago
I would absolutely recommend reading this book. The author creates a world full of dark beauty without making the characters inaccessable to teen girls. I am also intriged by the underlying thees of the story- that abuse leads to (in this case literally) losing one's humanity and prepetuating the cycle of violence and destruction. Luce, filled with insecurity but also more power than she knows, fights to break the cycle without losing the only place she feels loved.
ChelseaW More than 1 year ago
With her mother dead and her father in jail, Lucette lives with her abusive Uncle in a small coastal town in Alaska. When a particularly brutal night causes Luce to accidentally slip off the cliff and into the ocean below, she does not expect to survive. However, Luce soon wakes up and discovers she is now one of the many young girls to become mermaids of the sea. Luce meets others like herself and quickly adapts to her new life underwater. But when queen mermaid Catarina begins to act secretive and vindictive, Luce needs to think for herself... before something terrible happens. Those of you who follow this blog know I read a LOT of mermaid books. So there are a lot I can compare this one to. and while there are mermaid stories that are much better, this one wasn't that bad, really. Nothing in story came even close to being as beautiful as the cover art, but it was still an enjoyable read. Luce is a very compassionate 14-year-old girl. She so often thinks of others before herself. The other character in comparison felt a little flat and undeveloped. But I liked that the girls still had your typical girl troubles (mostly in getting along with each other). I also appreciated the science and biology of Sarah Porter's mermaids, especially in their coveted singing abilities. My only complaint is the serious lack of guys in this book! You can't possibly convince me that teen girls weren't on the lookout for boys! Lost Voices is a lovely mermaid story that is just as playful as it is dark and moody.
VietnameseReader More than 1 year ago
Gee, when I first saw it, it looked interesting. a couple of chapters more, I fell in love with this ammaaazzzzziiiinnnnggggg book!!!! I normally arent a fan of lady aouthors, but i got to say, Sarah Porter had done a fantastic job.
Meli_Green More than 1 year ago
Sarah Porter's new book, Lost Voices, is a raw, emotional, dark, and sad tale. Addressing the abuses of young girls at the hands of the people, who should love them and take care of them. Even touching on the subject of abandoned babies, which made my heart ache. While originally I was drawn to read this book because of its cover and the premise of girls turning into mermaids as I read this book it became clear this book would not follow the suit of most "Teen" novels. This book does not prepare you for the depths of sadness you will feel for the main character and all her loss and drama. The whole cast of characters in this opening novel are so intense and emotional, which is expected from young girls, from the meek and shy, to the outspoken and prissy snot. As the girls for the most part struggle with their anger of the human world, use their voices to seek out justified vengeance.
Rina30 More than 1 year ago
This book was beautiful and captivating. The story is very sad but also compelling. Abused girls who turn into Mermaids off the coast of Alaska. Luce lives with her abusive uncle after her father dies in a ship wreck. Her mother has been dead already and she travels with her father. Her uncle, her fathers brother, promises work in Alaska with boats. One night her uncle crosses the line and she finds herself in the ocean. She meets a tribe of Mermaids and they welcome her in. They all have a sad story that they don't want to talk or think about. They just want to kill humans for their evil ways. This book is a must read. The first in a trilogy that I can't wait to get my hands on!
NYCFeline More than 1 year ago
Lost Voices is a dark, moving and tantalizing first book in a new trilogy by Sarah Porter. Luce, the young protagonist, finds herself turned into a mermaid after her human life is brutally ended. We find that it is this tragic end to young girls which turns them into mermaids - an interesting twist and one which explains the mermaids desire to sink human ships using their magical voices. Luce struggles with this as she still retains her humanity and a deep sensitivity. Her struggle and intrinsic differences from the other mermaids moves the story in the most absorbing way. While some of the mermaids are not exactly sympathetic and the ending is a bit sudden, I am confident that the next book in this series will be just as much a "can't put down" as Lost Voices is. I highly recommend this book and look forward to future writings by this author.
Yaisa Rodriguez More than 1 year ago
This was one of the best books I have ever read. However, it really needs a sequel. The ending was very non-conclusive.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This book left me with some very strange feelings. I felt intrigued about the plot. The way it is written makes everything feel like a beautiful dream. However, some parts also had me horrified or appalled by how harsh it becomes. By the end... I feel like the harsh and horrible parts were necessary to make the beautiful and good stand out. Lovely!
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Lost Voices is a haunting, lyrical novel which uses the paranormal to illustrate difficult moral choices. The mermaids in the novel represent a return of the repressed - girls are transformed into mermaids as the result of a traumatic act. These mermaids are filled with a righteous vengeance, and use their voices to sink ships and drown humans. Luce, the protagonist, is an outcast in the human world. Upon becoming a mermaid, she is overjoyed to be accepted by their society. Yet her growing understanding of mermaid nature provokes internal conflict. Mermaids have a moral code, the timahk; the plot of the novel is driven by Luce's relationships with other mermaids and their moral code. While Lost Voices has grim subject matter, its overall message is one of perseverance, discovery and truth-seeking. It is absolutely beautifully written. Thematically reminiscent of the young adult classics of Robert Cormier, Lost Voices is a book that should allow readers to examine the humanity within themselves. Most highly recommended.
MERMAID123 More than 1 year ago
WOW! I was told about this book by a friend so I tried it and wow! it was so amazing i could not put the book down i didn't think i would like it so much since im not a reader. But i was wrong you have to read it!!!! dont judge a book by its cover you really will like it!!!!!
cara_ann More than 1 year ago
I will start off by saying that I did enjoy this book. The way Porter combines sirens and mermaids and the way they were created was very interesting. The plot was interesting and I was really excited when I picked it up. BUT the book was extremely slow-paced and nothing truly significant happened the entire story.Towards the end of the book some things finally happen and you start getting excited and it just abruptly ends. This is ment to be a series but I don't see it being very successful if there isn't anything important enough to remember in the first book. Personally I felt the writing of this could have been alot better than it was but it was still a good read.
ChambersGirl More than 1 year ago
Luce is a 14 year old girl who is painfully shy and tries so hard to fade in to the background wherever she is. She's spent nearly her entire life on the road and on the run with her father (a medium-time crook). Her father, in an effort to do right by her, moves the duo to an Alaskan town where her uncle (her dad's brother) lives. There, her father joins a fishing boat crew and sails out to sea, never to be seen or heard from again. The disappearance leaves Luce stranded with an uncle who is an alcoholic and neglectful, not to mention very abusive. Human life for ends for Luce on a terribly dark and lonely night after her uncle tries to violate her during a drunken stupor. She feels herself simply give up and give in to a cold, almost numbing feeling. She thinks she's died, but soon learns that not only is she still living, but that she transformed into a mermaid. She's adopted into a tribe of mermaids who have all been victims of abandonment and mistreatment. They spend their days giggling and acting like typical teenage girls with the exception that they've also found solace in exacting their revenge on humans by "singing" to humans on ships, enchanting them into crashing into cliffs and then ensure that every human on board parishes. In a culture where 'singers' are the cream of the mermaid crop, Luce finds herself in the middle of conflict. She is the most talented singer within their tribe, able to curve her song to fill and forgive the pains left in the hearts, memories, and souls of humans and mermaids alike. The queen of the tribe is convinced that Luce means to overthrow her and Luce is fighting against the lure and the pressure of singing humans to their death. As new members of the tribe are discovered or brought in, the level of strife is elevated. Readers are introduced to strong and malicious as well as sweet yet impressionable personalities, both making the waters volatile and the tribe more dangerous than ever. Will Luce find balance? Will she find peace? And will she find the place where she belongs? The most beautiful parts of the story, for me, had to do with the memories Luce holds of her father. I felt the love he had for his only child. My heart broke every time she thought of her former life with her father and heard him talking to her. Though he was a criminal, a "bad" man to so many, the love and adoration he held for his "baby doll" was flawless. Luce's dreams were another part of the story that I found to be very moving and poignant. I felt Luce's sadness and her turmoil in the dreams - reaching for something that wasn't open to her anymore and seeing her fears and her insecurities being flaunted before her. What prevents me from rating this novel a 4 out of 5 stars is that I couldn't feel the connection or the relationships within the tribe. Several times, Luce describes feeling a deep love and a belonging to the tribe, but I didn't feel it. I was also thrown by the introduction of the girls/mermaids from the orphanage. To move from Luce's story to their story and back again, wasn't exactly confusing, but I'm not sure it was necessary, either. There are also a few loose ends, not large enough to be considered cliff hangers, at the end of the story. Questions that will probably be addressed in future installments of the series, if the readers are committed to continuing Luce's tale (no pun intended).
CRss More than 1 year ago
I didn't love it, but it was interesting and the topic was different (not all vampires and werewolves). The writing wasn't bad, but it wasn't mind-blowing either. If you want an easy read, just for entertainment value, it's not bad.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
The cover of thr book made me want to read it and the beginning of the book was intense and dramatic but it was a big let down. I found multiple editing errors in the text which was bothersome. The story was very disjointed and i found it difficult to picture in my head what was happening at times. After reading thi si have absolutley no desire to read the next two. It proved to be so anticlimactic.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This is the best book ever abiut mermaids that i have ever read this was an awesome boook did not wqnt to put it down till i reached the end it was that good but had to put the book down due to middle school:( soo did not like doing that. look forward to reading second book something tells me it is going to be a really awesome such as this one hope you like this book and the other books in the trogoly hope the author writes a fiurth book and i havent even resd the second book how awesome is that so anybody in the mood to chat if not well hope u liked this book i loved this book"!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This book was really descriptive and desisive. It felt as if the author wanted me to feel the pain Luce ( main character) felt the songs that flew through her.This book was amazing, you will love it
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
I've always been fascinated by mermaids (not Ariel, REAL mermaids), so I found this book fascinating. And then I started reading it. This has gotta be the best fantasy book I've ever read. I love the character of Luce, in fact sometimes I could relate to her (not in the sense that I live with an abusive uncle in Alaska). Catarina was like a beautiful mess and I found the whole story very captivating
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
I was hoping for a book that would enchant me with the world of sirens/mermaids. But perhaps this is more of Mean Girls with fins. It lacked the mystical side of mermaids and focused mostly on social cliques. Lost Voices left me wondering "what is the point?" I read so many good reviews about this book that I kept trudging along hoping to get to the part that inspired them. Unfortunetly, I never reached it. The characters were annoying. I couldn't empathize even a little because I just could not bring myself to care enough about any of them. As for the plot, it seemed to drag on. I couldn't wait to get to the end of the book. There are a lot of unanswered questions that the reader is left with but despite this fact I will not be following this series.
BooksWithBite More than 1 year ago
I really love mermaid stories and when I read the back of the book it captured me. Mostly cause the storyline was different then what I see around. And this book was different yet it did run along the same lines as other mermaid stories. The characters in this book I really like. They were all the same as in the burden that they carried as a a human. I really like the old tale of how they become mermaids. It gave a an interesting twist on the story all together. Luce has been through so much. I adored her stealth and wittiness. She was different but didn't flaunt it. She just wanted to live a happy normal life for once. One thing that really grabbed me about her was her ways of finding out things. Even when she was sneaking around looking for answers, she never gave to much of herself away. She was always once step ahead of everyone. One thing that really grabbed me about this book was that there was no love interest. These girls or rather mermaids, their tale of surviving and what they went through was enough to hold the reader. They had to come to the conclusions if what they were doing was right. Do they seek forgiveness and let it go or do they allow humans to pay for the past things that was done to them? What these mermaids come to find is that there anger has caused more pain then what they know.
JeriStar More than 1 year ago
Lost Voices was a decent read. I had to force myself to pick it back up after it started to drag in the middle, but it is a decent start to a new trilogy. The reader is enticed into a world where abused girls transform into mermaids and sing sailors to their deaths with their otherworldly voices. Luce, newly transformed, feels guilty about killing and wonders if it is possible to be a mermaid and not kill humans. The story follows Luce's emotional journey as she tries to come to terms with her new life and decide between her new friends and her human morals. Lost Voices is a new take on mermaids and an emotional story of a girl struggling between fitting in and doing the right thing.
RebeccaNaomi More than 1 year ago
When I first saw this book in the catalogue of netGalley I knew I had to read it so I put a request for this book and a couple of others. The first letter that got back to me was a rejection and told me that it was because I keep putting off writing my bio. I still have not done that. I began to become afraid that I would not be able to read this one because of my absentee bio page and so was beyond ecstatic that I was given the go ahead to read it. The only problem was that I had just got back to school and I was now swamped with homework. I did the responsible thing and put my homework first. And when I finally had enough I whipped out my nook transferred the book there and spent the rest of the night and several hours the next day devouring Lost Voices by Sarah Porter. Lost Voices is the first book of a series and it should be. If it had been a stand alone I would have been forced to say some bad things about it but as it is a trilogy I have hope for the next two books. Or if she follows in the footsteps of so many authors before her there might be more even though it was only meant to be a trilogy. You know what I mean: Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy. Those are a good one time read. But Lost Voices is hard to put down. I picked it up to read an hour or so before going to bed and yet I was unable to stop until there was no physical way for me to continue. I loved the mythology of mermaids and I liked how Luce tries to keep her humanity. I didn't really understand why she was shunned when she was human though. I felt that Luce while Luce grew she did not really become all that different from the beginning but there is still hope in the second and third book of the series. This book showed a lot of potential. I liked Luce the most. While she was the main character she also was the only one to really retain any of her humanity. All of the other girls were a little evil. In fact I think that a couple of the characters in this book could have been left out because they added nothing to the story. However since they did not take anything away from the story either they did not really bug me too much. Finally I am not really all that sure who will ultimately be the ultimate antagonist for this series. Luce tries to defy the desire to kill humans that every mermaid has. In the spirit of speculation I think that the next book might touch a bit more on mermen. I think and I hope. But for this book you mostly only just dipped your toes into the world and I look forward to being able to see more about it. There is a mermaid queen named Catarina and I get the feeling that we were supposed to like her yet I could not really get onto that boat. Catarina was pretty psycho and I really wanted Luce to find someone else to become friends with and at one point I thought that she would but in the end the chance turned into nothing. Luce is just a little to desperate for somebody. There were a few things that I did not really like about this book. I felt that there were some points that were much too vague. And I am a little confused on what to call the ending. It is not really a cliffhanger but more like the author put the first page or two of the second book onto the end of the first. Because all of the action is finished by the end of the book but then it gives you just a hint of a problem that will be in the second book. Does that even make sense? Anyway it was an evil teaser to the second book because of the fact that
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
If you are into mermaids this is a book for you . It's 230 pages. 18 chapters
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
The book bothered me very much. The plot was great, but I read parts where the typos and incomplete thoughts where too much to handle, I read this book when it was new, and am still bothered by a part where one second its talking about seals and then halfway through a sentence it changes direction and starts talking about something totally different. Other than the numerous spelling and grammar issues, I would say this is a good book. The spelling and grammar is why I gave this a 1 star rating.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago