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Anonymous
Posted November 27, 2012
Whatever you say, love.
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Posted November 27, 2012
And yes we can still meet here
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Posted May 8, 2011
This is a decent story, but it desperately needs an editor. Spelling and gramatical errors seem to get worse as the story progresses. The worst is the author's terrible tendency to not remember the sex of the characters. Toward the end of the story, the author switches back and forth between male and female several times on the same page. Lastly the ending is extremely disappointing. It feels like the author got tired of writing and just wrote a single page to end it.
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