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I could see this plot better detailed and fleshed out into a real and decent story. As it stood there were too many pieces and not enough pulling it together. It just seemed like the author was working way too hard to make the main character special which is particularly hard in a fantasy setting where we don't know what the norm is, why the norm that way, or what those differences mean in regard to a larger context.
I couldn't tell if there was supposed to be the implication of star crossed love there or not. I couldn't tell if these royal women had some sort of extra lust or something though it seemed implied. I didn't get what was so special about being demonic. I wasn't given a clear idea of what it meant to be a shifter, why it was special, what the rules were or anything else that would have give the work context.
The sex scenes were a bit awkward. A lot of the same over and over. They were abruptly written in in some places. The whole "I'm afraid to hurt you theme" might be popular cause of twilight or whatever but it's annoying gross, and lacks context in this work.
If you're looking to see a take on this work that's still short and done well try Snaring the Huntress. It has a complete thought out plot and some of the interest a shifter work should have.
18 out of 19 people found this review helpful.
Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.Cheap porn with absolutly no plot.
12 out of 17 people found this review helpful.
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Posted May 4, 2011
i liked it but it was way to short and the end got a little confusing but it was a good quick read
8 out of 9 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 17, 2011
It was a great short story. Made you relate to the shy girl who feels somewhat invisible compared to her sister. I would definitely read it again. Loved it!
5 out of 6 people found this review helpful.
Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.i didnt think the book was gonna be all that good but after the first few lines i was stuck in it. It does have alot of sex sence in it well actaully every page but it was free and usually free book arent any good but i give it a 5 star
3 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Posted March 13, 2011
this would have been better if it would have been a regular book needs much more detail it just didnt work!!! Glad i didnt pay for it!
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted March 4, 2012
Shadowfang ...... what the he**this isnt a chat room for god sake
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted April 1, 2011
THis book dident have much of a story to offer, no imagination needed.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted March 18, 2011
awesome book just sad it was too short:/
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted March 2, 2011
This book was just ok. It was really hard to follow. It didn't explain much the type of creature that Aidan turned into other than some type of demon. I would have liked a little more about him.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 15, 2011
Very good light reading, not too long, not too short. I was kind of confused with what Aidan was exactly, but it's okay.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 2, 2011
I enjoyed the story. It is short but sweet. I plan to enjoy more Naughty Nooners stories in the future.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted July 11, 2010
wasting my time
1 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted May 18, 2012
Between the random sex on the beach while the family is there...to the not complete sentences and the shortness...there is not much of a story. The randomness and non exsistant build up this story made no sense...horay for very short kind of decent sex scenes.
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Posted May 13, 2012
OK but not great
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Posted April 30, 2012
This is an awsome read! I never thought any book could hold my attention from the very first page. Kudos to the author !
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Posted April 21, 2012
This is a nice little collectionbof rather short stories.
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Posted April 4, 2012
This book could have been good but I feel the author got lazy. This is similar to one of my first drafts. Seemed like she put more time into the sex than story. I might have read it wrong, but was her father encouraging his daughters to have multiple partners? This has some major potential but currently stands as a waste of time to read.
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Posted April 4, 2012
THIS WAS A GOOD BOOK VERY WELL WRITTEN. I WOULD READ MORE FROM THIS AUTHOR. KEEP THE GOOD WORK UP
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Posted March 28, 2012
This book has no plot, no character development, no literary achievements to speak of. It's not even worth one star. I couldve written this in third grade. Without sex on every single page though. Try again, b/c this "book" sucks.
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Overview
Kate, shapeshifter and royal princess, has fallen in love with her bodyguard, Aidan, a man with the perfect body built to defend and love her at any cost. Aidan has been encouraging Kate to accept her shifter future and settle on one form. During a storm, Aidan accidentally shows his true form to her. Now Kate must decide if her love is strong enough to accept Aidan's true heritage.