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Anonymous
Posted March 12, 2012
I literally had to force myself to finish this short book. The grammar is absolutely horrendous and not just here and there. Every single page has something terribly wrong with it. Examples you ask? "Her hair was tied enviously in a high ponytail"..."why did she felt the need to leave"..."one thousand of centuries ago"..."Ally could not have thought of things getting any worst."..."Although, she knew that she now nothing was visible, she definitely still felt a presence."
Honestly, I know that its hard to write and put yourself out there but don't you have a 12 year old neighbor who can proofread your stuff before you publish it? At times I was embarrassed for this author.
24 out of 31 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 14, 2012
FIRST WITH BITTEN AND NOW STOLEN THE AUTHOR CREATES A FUN AND EXCITING STIRY ONLY TO LEAVE US HANGING AND WAITING FOR THE NEXT ONE!!!!!
13 out of 18 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 11, 2012
Good story, but the Author needs tobrush up on grammer and vocabulary. Worth reading if you can look past the errors in tense, punctuation, spelling and word choice.
11 out of 15 people found this review helpful.
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Posted March 25, 2012
These books are amazing, a great story line, but DOES need to be edited better. Bitten and Stolen are good reads in my opinion, but she needs to get the third one out NOW! She either needs to find someone to edit for her, or do a better job herself. The books would be more enjoyable if she would get her stuff together.
Thanks
8 out of 8 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 8, 2012
I have enjoyed both books and cannot wait to see how it all works out in the end. I truly just cannot put these down and eagerly awiat the next installment.
5 out of 6 people found this review helpful.
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Posted March 20, 2012
The story in this book may be a good one, but I couldn't ignore the horrid grammar. Seriously, when you have to read the same sentence repeatedly, and then still not understand it, that is just bad editing. Some errors are to be expected, but I just could't finish the book.pppr
4 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 23, 2012
Wow this was good. I need to read the next one. Wish i knew it was not out yet i may have waited. Hurry please
3 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Posted March 10, 2012
Write the next book already!!!!!!!!
2 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Posted March 6, 2012
Really enjoyed Bitten and Stolen. Can't wait for the next one! Packed with so much excitement and suspense, and great characters! I hope the next one is longer.
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 6, 2012
I really have enjoyed this series and can't wait for the next book.
2 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Posted January 30, 2012
Love the series....
2 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Posted May 17, 2012
Hurry and write the next book already!!! Im DYING to read what happens next!!!! --A--
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted April 18, 2012
The second book in this series was just as good as the first but again somewhat disappointed being left with a massive cliffhanger and no indication when the final installment will be available. That being said be prepared for roller coaster ride of emotions from fear, to hope to downright frustration and disappointment.
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted March 31, 2012
These stories may be short but they keep you on the edge of your seat and you can t put the book down. I really wished i had not started reading until the third book was out cause i m very impatient. Can t wait. Debbie
1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.
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Posted March 13, 2012
I like this book so much i read it twice.
1 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted March 10, 2012
Too short....
1 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted March 10, 2012
I cant wait for the third book in this series!
1 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted March 9, 2012
Great!!! Can't wait for the third book
1 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted March 7, 2012
Great read.
1 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Posted February 29, 2012
I wish I knew the third book wasnt out. I would have waited, but it is a great series so far. Cant wait for the third book.
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Overview
When a shackled Ally awakes inside a cold, dank cell, she quickly remembers that her life took a sudden wrong turn. Her friends, also incarcerated, are swiftly brought up to date and now fear for their lives. How could Ally be stuck in a vampiric love triangle? Will they ever be freed? Worst still, Ally was in transformation and she was getting quite… thirsty. Benedict was possibly her only hope.-----
"Stolen" is book Two of the “Bitten” Series.