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WARNING: This story has nothing to do with time travel. At all. Seriously the most inaccurately named book ever.
In spite of the confusion with the name I gave this story a chance and read it all the way through. That was a mistake. This short story started out so promising... the first half was actually almost sci-fi but by about halfway through it turns into an allegory for the christian creation story and by two thirds it is an all out "science is a lie and god hates you" speech. This author seriously has "God" asserting what I can only assume to be his (the authors) personal opinions. This author complements his complete absence of understanding of any scientific knowledge with his utter lack of writing ability. There was at least one (often two or three) spelling errors PER PAGE. There was horrible grammar and a few words that just flat out don't exist. There are so many more things wrong with this story both in the writing and the story itself that I can't fit them all in a single review so let me sum this all up: AVOID AT ALL COSTS. EVEN IF THEY START GIVING THIS AWAY FOR FREE PLEASE DO NOT DOWNLOAD. YOU WILL LOSE BRAIN CELLS. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.
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Posted February 26, 2012
If I wanted to be preached too I would go to church. This book is in the wrong catagory.
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Posted May 13, 2012
an interesting story
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Posted July 17, 2011
....you like to read many typos, poor grammar, misspellings galore in a short book. I have never seen such an unprofessional publication. The errors are 3rd grade level and I doubt the book was EVER proof read. Disgraceful that it is even being sold!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted May 30, 2011
I think the book was good. There were to many gramicle errors though. I bought the book thinking it was about time travel. Not true. Also im a christian and i dont think that when God was saying stuff about giving up on humanity was a good idea from the author. Overall a good read.
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Posted May 19, 2011
I agree with AeonsAblaze. This started out as a great sci-fi story but then became all about God telling the guy how he did not keep his faith during his life.
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Posted April 5, 2011
This book was great!!!! It has a lot of grammatical errors, but it is pretty easy to figure out what the author meant. Also, there are a lot of points in the book where it won't make sense the first time through; just read it again, slower this time, untill you understand it. It should make sense eventually. Honestly, this book has me wondering if this is actually what happened. ( I think, when I am a lot older, that I might try to test that theory, about that whole ' creating a solar system ' thing.)
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Posted March 17, 2011
The more I read, the more my fingers ached to be able to edit this myself! Unfortunately, some parts are so poorly written that I fear I would be unable to figure out the authors intent. If you can't get past bad grammar and spelling errors then skip this one. If you can look beyond the errors, you might enjoy this story about a man who learns that given enough time, one might be able to see exactly what God sees when He looks down on humanity!
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Posted March 4, 2011
Aeons said it all
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