J. Barton Mitchell's The Razor is a riveting science fiction thriller about a man struggling to survive the chaos on a prison planet.
Brilliant engineer Marcus Flynn has been sentenced to 11-H37 alongside the galaxy’s most dangerous criminals. A hard labor prison planet better known as the Razor, where life expectancy is short and all roads are dead ends.
At least until the Lost Prophet goes active…
In a few hours, prison guards and staff are evacuated, the prisoners are left to die, and dark mysteries begin to surface.
Only Flynn has the skills and knowledge to unravel them, but he will have to rely on the most unlikely of allieskillers, assassins, pirates and smugglers. If they can survive each other they just might survive the Razor…and claim it for their own.
|Publisher:||Tom Doherty Associates|
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About the Author
J. Barton Mitchell is an author and screenwriter of speculative fiction, living somewhere between Austin, TX and Taos, NM. The Razor is his fourth novel.
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Every time he closed his eyes, he was drowning. Water poured into the car, flooding the leather interior as it sank into Elliott Bay. He remembered looking to the passenger seat and the shock that washed over him. The wound in her head. The spray pattern on the window. How her hair floated up with the rising water, copper strands shining in the city lights outside the shattered glass. He watched her vanishing in the cold, and realized two things.
He didn't know who she was.
And he was holding a pulse pistol ...
* * *
The world shook and jarred Flynn awake. He was staring through the shuttle's tiny window again.
The starfield from before had been replaced with something more distinct now. Inspiring and frightening all at once. He recognized it instantly. A planet. 11H37. Unique in all the galaxy. Utter darkness on one side, raging heat on the other. He could just make out the slim streak of green that split the two massive halves. It looked tiny, nestled precariously between its giant siblings. It looked like it was being crushed.
It was called the Razor.
In spite of everything, Flynn felt excitement looking at it. Everything that had made him what he once was came from this world. Then again, it had also made him who he was now.
The image of the planet, fire and ice split in half, lasted a moment longer, then the shuttle hit the atmosphere and the windows were full of red streaks and Flynn remembered where he was and why and for how long and reality came crashing back. Excitement faded. Fear returned.
He sat back in the hard, cracked seat and breathed deep as everything around him shook again. Before the heat shields slid down over the windows, he saw the ship's energy field flare to life with a bluish, crackling sheen. He wondered how many shuttles actually made it through the planet's ionosphere to the surface. The numbers probably weren't even published. After all, the ship was remote-piloted, and as for the occupants ... well, no one really cared about them, did they?
The shuttle shook again. He jarred upward before the restraints on his ankles yanked him back down, biting into his skin. A strange static hum built in the air; he could hear it even over the engines. He felt the tingling on his skin, felt his ears begin to itch. It wouldn't be long now.
There were thirty seats inside, screwed into each wall, forcing the occupants to stare at one another. A woman with worn-out skin, a big scar over her left cheek, and wiry, muscular arms sat in front of him. She was breathing heavily, the pace increasing each time the ship contorted. To her left was a kid with more tattoos than Flynn had ever seen — swastikas and hash tags, skulls and dragons — his head shaved clean, no older than twenty. The tats and the head made him look tough, but Flynn could hear him whimpering, trying not to lose it. The pattern repeated everywhere he looked, in the eyes of every person who was shackled to the shuttle. He'd never met any of them, but he could guess who they were. Killers. Thieves. Gunrunners. Tweakers. Smugglers. Hackers.
No matter how shrewd or scary they had once been, they were all frightened now. All of them. Because everyone knew where they were going.
The shuttle vibrated. The static hum grew louder. The edges of Flynn's vision were beginning to whiten and flare out.
Next to the kid with the tats sat another man. He didn't seem absorbed in his own anxiety as much as everyone else. Average height, in good shape, and his hair was wavy, probably even stylish a few weeks ago, before whatever happened to get him on this shuttle. There was a sense of order about him too, the way he corrected his posture each time the craft rocked, the equal lengths of his shoelaces. He had a different look. It felt like he didn't belong here as much as everyone else.
Flynn could relate.
For a moment, the man looked up and the two stared directly at each other.
Then the shuttle contorted violently and they both closed their eyes, waiting for what was to come.
The static hum became a whine, and then there was a scary groaning from the window behind his head as the fuselage began to stretch and bend. Flynn felt the gravity press him into his seat, but sensation in his feet and hands was gone now. The white in his periphery grew. Nausea blossomed in his stomach. The static whine filled his ears, threatening to burst them as the shuttle rocked and shook.
Flynn passed out. There was nothing but darkness.
Until pain lanced through his body, jarring him back awake.
Electricity. It burned and froze, contracted all his muscles at once. He would have yelled, but his body was locked down.
He heard people moan, recognized the sounds of vomit hitting the metal floor, could barely make out blurry shapes moving through the shuttle. They all looked the same: shades of gray and black, with a single glowing spot of color on their arms. One of them stood above Flynn, a gargoyle with horrible elongated arms and glowing blue eyes and a sword that crackled lightning.
"Wake your ass up," the thing spoke to him harshly, a frightening, staticky mess of sound. The sword arched down. More pain, lancing through him, hot and cold.
Flynn tried not to vomit at the streaking pain and the leftover nausea from the entry. He wanted to curl up in a ball, but he was still shackled to the seat.
The pain refocused his senses. He looked back up and saw that it wasn't a gargoyle at all. It was a man. Wearing a gray and black armored uniform like the half dozen others now inside the ship. A yellow, holographic patch glowed on his arm, flashing and morphing between a logo of a spinning circle and the word Admissions. The glowing eyes were the reflected light from the HUD in the helmet he wore, and the sword was just some kind of electrified baton that sparked and fizzled.
"Wake up!" the figure barked, his voice emitted electronically from the helmet.
Flynn's face stung in pain as the man backhanded him, hard. He tasted blood.
Another armored man moved to the woman on his left. His club sparked as it struck her. Flynn could see her body contort. The pattern repeated everywhere in the shuttle, which was no longer moving. They'd landed. They were being woken up from the unconsciousness that came from passing through the Razor's charged ionosphere. Not gently, either.
Moments later, rapid-fire metallic clicking echoed up and down the interior as the shackles on the passengers' legs and arms disengaged. Half the people inside fell to the floor, still dizzy and sick. Flynn managed to stay in place, but just barely.
A man stepped inside from the rear air lock, and as he did the guards all stood straight. The silence that followed let the sounds of vomiting and whimpering fill the cabin.
The man wore the same gray and black body armor, the same yellow holographic patch, but unlike his men he had no helmet. He was tall, older than the others, with a gray buzz cut and a tightly trimmed white beard. The way he stood — perfect posture, feet shoulder-width apart, hands clasped behind his back — he looked exactly like what he probably was: former UEG military. He swept a stern, unsympathetic look across the passengers.
"Ladies and gentlemen," he said, his voice carrying easily in the cramped confines of the shuttle, "let me be the first to welcome you home. The last home any of you will ever know. But most definitely ... the one you deserve."
One by one, the whimpering and the complaining stopped. Every person inside the shuttle, down the line of seats and restraints, looked up at the guard captain; his armored suit, his shined boots, his short hair, flanked by his men. It was all very real now.
"Get them up," the captain said, then stepped back into the air lock without looking back.
The back of Flynn's head stung as a fist knocked him forward. He barely managed to stand through the dizziness and disorientation. Ahead, he could just make out a hallway beyond the air lock, made of drab, faded cement. Words had been stenciled there in a nondescript yellow print.
11-H37. HARD LABOR COLONY. LIFETIME INCARCERATION.
A line had been drawn through the 11-H37, and another word was scrawled hastily in its place. Razor.
The paint was fading and old, and something about that, the fact that something so obviously against protocol had been allowed to remain for so long, implied many unsettling things.
A boot kicked Flynn forward with the others, marching them in a line toward the air lock, and every step he took toward the faded words gave him a feeling of finality. It was all really happening ...CHAPTER 2
Maddox had been here before, but it was still all new.
He could see Personnel Entry through the glass partition where the new prisoners were being herded. He'd left through that port two months ago. Now he was returning through Prisoner Intake. Definition of irony.
Yellow lights flashed above the mechanical doors that began to seal off the shuttle they'd arrived on, and when they shut, it was with a heavy, metallic thud that jarred through everyone in the concrete room.
He and the other prisoners, probably forty, had been marched into the intake area by the guards and assembled into rows of three. He knew there were three automated processors. He'd watched them do their thing before, often with a detached fascination, marveling at the efficiency with which human beings became prisoners, and prisoners, in turn, became numbers.
Glancing at the line next to him, he saw the same man who had been sitting across from him on the shuttle. Thin, with wiry fingers and soft hands, and a presence that had an odd depth to it. His stance lacked the ruggedness of the other prisoners'. Everything that had made him who he was, was internal, Maddox could tell. People like that, the Razor tended to grind up first.
Still, he'd managed to keep it together during Razorfall. He hadn't cried out when the guards struck him. But Maddox had seen this place change its fair share of people. There was no way to know who the man would be after year three or four, if he survived that long, but it was certain he wouldn't resemble the person he was now.
Of course, Maddox could say the same thing about himself, couldn't he?
Year three or four ...
The line advanced. Person after person. Until Maddox and the other man were next.
A guard waited there, brandishing his club, the processor line beyond him. Like most, he wore the armored helmet, the HUD behind the viewscreen making the "eyes" glow blue. If there was recognition on the guard's part when Maddox reached him, Maddox couldn't detect it.
If not now, he thought, soon.
"Strip," crackled the guard's disturbingly amplified voice.
Maddox unbuttoned the hyperstatic suit everyone had to wear on the shuttle for landing. When he was naked, the guard motioned him forward toward the processor.
The transporter was metallic, shaped like a sled, with sections branching off from the center for the arms and legs. Maddox stepped in and winced at the cold metal on his skin. It wasn't meant to be comfortable, but nothing on the planet was. The guard strapped him to the transporter, then slapped on the head restraint. All he could do was breathe and blink, and even doing that was uncomfortable.
"Enjoy the ride," the guard said through his helmet, then struck him across the face. Maddox tasted blood as the conveyor system locked on and shuttled him forward.
Everything went dark. Strange lights flashed in his peripheral vision. He could hear screams in the distance. Curses. Weeping. The high-pitched rattling of the guards' electrified batons.
Maddox's heart pounded. He knew what was coming.
A computer monitor appeared above him, following along, lowering just inches away, until the only thing he could see was the dim reflection of his face in the dark glass.
The monitor flashed. Words scrolled.
Prisoner Intake Process, v.12.4.5
Identity confirmation scan ...
From the dark, a metallic arm descended. Attached to it was a small reticle that drifted down toward his right eye.
Stare into the reticle, do not blink
Red light burned into his eye. On impulse Maddox looked away — and then jolted in pain. The sled was electrified. It stung bad.
Stare into the reticle, do not blink
Maddox swallowed, did as the monitor instructed.
The red light flared again. It lasted a second, then the laser shut off.
NAME: Maddox, James
ID Number: 28444
Conviction Date: 8/21/2174
Infraction: First-Degree Homicide, Conspiracy and Embezzlement, Human Trafficking
Blood Type: O Rh D Negative
Medical Concerns: None
Gang Affiliation: None
The other charges were bullshit, of course, tacked-on infractions to cover the asses of the ones who were still alive. But the homicide ... that one he owned. That one was legit.
Basic Sterilization Protocol ...
A hiss of sound, like the buzzing of bees, materialized ahead of him as the gurney moved into the dark. His body passed through a thick mist of freezing liquid. It burned like acid.
Maddox couldn't help it. He screamed.
His cries ripped the dark like those of all the others around him, as whatever microbes he'd brought along were burned away.
The monitor reappeared, descending down. It flashed on again.
Maddox's breath came in short bursts. He knew what was next.
ID Implant Protocol ...
He tensed as he read the words. A new arm hummed down toward him, a mix of sharp, wicked-looking contraptions dripping with antiseptic.
The restraints around his neck tightened, locking his skull in place. The strap on his chin cranked down, forcing his mouth open. Maddox choked, gagged, barely able to breathe.
He could just make out the tiny polymer drill at the end of the arm shriek to life as it descended.
Instinctively, Maddox tried to twist out of the way. His eyes shut tight. The drill pushed into his mouth.
A sound like saw blades on metal filled his head. Pain, a mix of ice and electricity, lanced through his jaw as the drill plunged efficiently through bone and cartilage and nerve.
He screamed with the contraption inside his mouth, struggled, tried to turn, but there was nowhere to go. Pain just kept pouring into his head, filling him up with white heat. He started to black out.
Then the arm pulled out of his mouth, and Maddox gagged again.
He'd just been implanted with the same microchip all prisoners on the Razor received. If he ever wanted to get it out, he'd have to remove his entire jaw.
The monitor flashed above one more time.
Intake Process Complete
Prisoner ID Number: 28444
Prisoner Group Designation Color: White
Thank you for your cooperation
Cooperation means reward
Resistance means punishment
The monitor went dark, but it didn't lift away. The transporter ground to a halt. Maddox was still a hundred yards from the end of processing. His eyes narrowed.
Then the figures appeared above him, two on each side.
They weren't dressed like guards. No helmets. Lighter, camouflaged armor. Much more physically fit. One of them leaned in, smiling unpleasantly. A muscular, balding fellow with a handlebar mustache.
Maddox knew him well.(Continues…)
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Table of Contents
Part I: Charon,
Six: Them Bones,
Eleven: Yellow Lights,
Sixteen: Lost Prophet,
Part II: Site Eleven,
Seventeen: Lucky Days,
Twenty-Seven: Suits and Ladders,
Thirty-Two: Second Chances,
Thirty-Three: Who You Are,
Thirty-Four: Dust and Darkness,
Thirty-Six: Hot Labs,
Thirty-Seven: Wasted Fear,
Thirty-Eight: The Dark,
Part III: Artifact A,
Forty-One: Rabbit Holes,
Forty-Two: Flags and Cakes,
Forty-Three: First Names,
Forty-Four: Blood and Fire,
Forty-Nine: Wash and Repeat,
Fifty: Stay Awake,
Fifty-Two: Terrible Things,
Fifty-Three: Names and Titles,
Fifty-Four: Come With Me,
Fifty-Seven: Full Throttle,
Sixty: Better Deals,
Sixty-Two: Heat Sinks,
Sixty-Five: Progressive Complications,
Sixty-Seven: Sense of Metal,
Seventy-Two: Dead People,
Seventy-Three: Red Book,
Seventy-Six: Shadow and Fire,
About the Author,
Most Helpful Customer Reviews
I received a free copy of THE RAZOR by J. Barton Mitchell in exchange for an honest review. This is a science fiction prison escape novel. The Razor is a prison planet where only the worst criminals in the galaxy are sentenced to spend their remaining years. There, the inmates toil away at hard, dangerous labor under the supervision of guards who are even worse than the inmates. Marcus Flynn has been sentenced to the Razor. Almost as soon as Flynn arrives, a planetary self-destruct triggers, the guards evacuate, and all prisoners are left to meet their doom. Flynn is then given a single chance for survival; if he can gather the required data and make it to the spaceport, he will be saved. One small problem: there’s a planet full of homicidal maniacs between him and his goal. This was action-packed, but the author still managed to develop the main characters. Fits neatly into the science fiction prison break genre. Well worth the time spent reading. #TheRazor #NetGalley
The Razor J. Barton Mitchell Mitchell’s latest is a sensational scare your socks off, fast paced adult sci-fi apocalyptic thriller set roughly 150 years in the future on an unwelcoming penal colony planet and staring the most unlikely rag tag group of criminals heroes ever to grace the pages of fiction. The backdrops are beautifully brutal and the author’s narrative brings the amazing alien landscapes to life for his readers complete with strange lifeforms, altered humans from both successful and failed bio-experiments plus your requisite sci-fi nerdy engineer/scientist. The first-rate tale is tightly plotted, inventive with believably unbelievable futuristic people places and things that will keep the audience on their toes, hearts pounding while constantly waiting for the other shoe to drop. The real standouts of the story are his main players, Flynn, Key, Maddox, Raelyn, Zane and Gable. And the ending leads one to believe that fans will hopefully be making a return trip to The Razor in the future. Well-done Mr. Mitchell, well done! SUMMARY: When you’re sent to planet 11-H37 there’s one thing for sure, you will die there. It's a hard labor penal planet an unforgiving inhospitable place where half the planet is boiling in constant heat and the other half is dark and colder than a freezer and dividing the two uninhabitable parts where the prison is located is a tiny green space called The Razor. A place that Dr. Marcus Flynn helped build and design and now a place that will become his ultimate final resting place because someone needed him gone– framed him for a crime and made sure he got sent there. Then without warning all hell breaks loose and while the alarms are screaming all prison personnel evacuated the planet leaving the inmates to perish. Flynn and a few other inmates make their escape. But where are they escaping to and who can be trusted?
Ahoy there me mateys! I received this sci-fi eARC from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. So here be me honest musings . . . This book takes place on the planet prison 11-H37, otherwise known as the razor. Those who are sentenced there stay there for the rest of their short lives. The prisoners are disposable tools used to mine the galaxy's primary energy source. The more useful ye are, the longer ye might live. Gang affiliations are recommended and corruption is the norm. This was just an okay read for me. I loved the weird prison culture that was set up. Unfortunately, the story doesn't take place within that culture because a problem breaks out fairly quickly that leads to the evacuation of the prison planet and the breakdown of the social structure. The planet itself has an odd habitat in that there is a hot side and cold side of the planet with a small livable region in the middle of the two. However that region is becoming unstable and a small group of prisoners must try to get off the planet before the balance tips towards total annihilation. The highlight of this book for me was in the characterization. I liked the six main characters that ye end up following. In particular, Key and Zane were favourites. The characters are what kept me reading. The book was engaging up until the half-way point and then slowed down significantly. Part of it was the gaps in plot structure and the other part was the unbelievably of the action sequences. I also didn't like the ready-made romance elements. There is an evil monster that is conveniently added in so the main characters have a lot of chase scenes with last minute close calls. What I wanted was for the characters to cleverly use their set of talents to escape. Instead there was a continual series of close calls and escapes by chance. The main characters should have died over and over again and yet none did. The plot was sloppy and the tech, while interesting, didn't make sense. And yet I did want the characters to succeed. And I did want Zane to get answers. So I kept readin' to find out why. I didn't get answers to Zane's questions. But I did get an ending that I wasn't expecting. The set-up for the next book does seem promising but I am hesitant to pick up the rest of the series because I didn't like the plot elements. I think this book has potential but it just wasn't completely to me taste. Arrr!