“You’re going to feel uncomfortable in your new world for a bit. But I hope you feel a bit exhilarated too. Live boldly. Push yourself. Don’t settle. Just live well. Just live. Love, Will.”
How do you move on after losing the person you loved? How do you build a life worth living?
Louisa Clark is no longer just an ordinary girl living an ordinary life. After the transformative six months spent with Will Traynor, she is struggling without him. When an extraordinary accident forces Lou to return home to her family, she can’t help but feel she’s right back where she started.
Her body heals, but Lou herself knows that she needs to be kick-started back to life. Which is how she ends up in a church basement with the members of the Moving On support group, who share insights, laughter, frustrations, and terrible cookies. They will also lead her to the strong, capable Sam Fielding—the paramedic, whose business is life and death, and the one man who might be able to understand her. Then a figure from Will’s past appears and hijacks all her plans, propelling her into a very different future. . . .
For Lou Clark, life after Will Traynor means learning to fall in love again, with all the risks that brings. But here Jojo Moyes gives us two families, as real as our own, whose joys and sorrows will touch you deeply, and where both changes and surprises await.
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The big man at the end of the bar is sweating. He holds his head low over his double scotch and every few minutes he glances up and out behind him toward the door, and a fine sheen of perspiration glistens under the strip lights. He lets out a long, shaky breath disguised as a sigh and turns back to his drink.
“Hey. Excuse me?”
I look up from polishing glasses.
“Can I get another one here?”
I want to tell him that it’s really not a good idea, that it won’t help. That it might even put him over the limit. But he’s a big guy and it’s fifteen minutes till closing time and according to company guidelines, I have no reason to tell him no. So I walk over and take his glass and hold it up to the optic. He nods at the bottle.
“Double,” he says, and slides a fat hand down his damp face.
“That’ll be seven pounds twenty, please.”
It is a quarter to eleven on a Tuesday night, and the Shamrock and Clover, East City Airport’s Irish-themed pub that is as Irish as Mahatma Gandhi, is winding down for the night. The bar closes ten minutes after the last plane takes off, and right now it is just me, the intense young man with the laptop, the two cackling women at table 2, and the man nursing a double Jameson’s waiting on SC107 to Stockholm and DB224 to Munich, the latter of which has been delayed for forty minutes.
I have been on since midday, as Carly had a stomachache and went home. I didn’t mind. I never mind staying late. Humming softly to the sounds of Celtic Pipes of the Emerald Isle Vol. III, I walk over and collect the glasses from the two women, who are peering intently at some video footage on a phone. They laugh the easy laughs of the well lubricated.
“My granddaughter. Five days old,” says the blond woman, as I reach over the table for her glass.
“Lovely.” I smile. All babies look like currant buns to me.
“She lives in Sweden. I’ve never been. But I have to go see my first grandchild, don’t I?”
“We’re wetting the baby’s head.” They burst out laughing again. “Join us in a toast? Go on, take a load off for five minutes. We’ll never finish this bottle in time.”
“Oops! Here we go. Come on, Dor.” Alerted by a screen, they gather up their belongings, and perhaps it’s only me who notices a slight stagger as they brace themselves for the walk toward security. I place their glasses on the bar, scan the room for anything else that needs washing.
“You never tempted then?” The smaller woman has turned back for her scarf.
“To just walk down there, at the end of a shift. Hop on a plane. I would.” She laughs again. “Every bloody day.”
I smile, the kind of professional smile that might convey anything at all, and turn back toward the bar.
• • •
Around me the concession stores are closing up for the night, steel shutters clattering down over the overpriced handbags and emergency-gift Toblerones. The lights flicker off at gates 3, 5, and 11, the last of the day’s travelers winking their way into the night sky. Violet, the Congolese cleaner, pushes her trolley toward me, her walk a slow sway, her rubber-soled shoes squeaking on the shiny Marmoleum.
“You shouldn’t be here this late, sweetheart. You should be home with your loved ones.”
She says exactly the same thing to me every night.
“Not long now.” I respond with these exact words every night. Satisfied, she nods and continues on her way.
Intense Young Laptop Man and Sweaty Scotch Drinker have gone. I finish stacking the glasses and cash up, checking twice to make sure the till roll matches what is in the till. I note everything in the ledger, check the pumps, jot down what we need to reorder. It is then that I notice the big man’s coat is still over his bar stool. I walk over and glance up at the monitor. The flight to Munich would be just boarding if I felt inclined to run his coat down to him. I look again and then walk slowly over to the Gents.
“Hello? Anyone in here?”
The voice that emerges is strangled and bears a faint edge of hysteria. I push open the door. The Scotch Drinker is bent low over the sinks, splashing his face. His skin is chalk-white.
“Are they calling my flight?”
“It’s only just gone up. You’ve probably got a few minutes.”
I make to leave, but something stops me. The man is staring at me, his eyes two tight little buttons of anxiety. He shakes his head. “I can’t do it.” He grabs a paper towel and pats at his face. “I can’t get on the plane.”
“I’m meant to be traveling over to meet my new boss, and I can’t. And I haven’t had the guts to tell him I’m scared of flying.” He shakes his head. “Not scared. Terrified.”
I let the door close behind me.
“What’s your new job?”
He blinks. “Uh . . . car parts. I’m the new Senior Regional Manager bracket Spares close bracket for Hunt Motors.”
“Sounds like a big job,” I say. “You have . . . brackets.”
“I’ve been working for it a long time.” He swallows hard. “Which is why I don’t want to die in a ball of flame. I really don’t want to die in an airborne ball of flame.”
I am tempted to point out that it wouldn’t actually be an airborne ball of flame, more a rapidly descending one, but suspect it wouldn’t really help. He splashes his face again and I hand him another paper towel.
“Thank you.” He lets out another shaky breath and straightens up, attempting to pull himself together. “I bet you never saw a grown man behave like an idiot before, huh?”
“About four times a day.”
His tiny eyes widen.
“About four times a day I have to fish someone out of the men’s loos. And it’s usually down to fear of flying.”
He blinks at me.
“But you know, like I say to everyone else, no planes have ever gone down from this airport.”
His neck shoots back in his collar. “Really?”
“Not even . . . a little crash on the runway?”
I shake my head.
“It’s actually pretty boring here. People fly off, go to where they’re going, come back again a few days later.” I lean against the door to prop it open. These lavatories never smell any better by the evening. “And anyway, personally, I think there are worse things that can happen to you.”
“Well, I suppose that’s true.”
He considers this, looks sideways at me. “Four a day, huh?”
“Sometimes more. Now if you wouldn’t mind, I really have to get back. It’s not good for me to be seen coming out of the men’s loos too often.”
He smiles, and for a minute I can see how he might be in other circumstances. A naturally ebullient man. A cheerful man. A man at the top of his game of continentally manufactured car parts.
“You know, I think I hear them calling your flight.”
“You reckon I’ll be okay.”
“You’ll be okay. It’s a very safe airline. And it’s just a couple of hours out of your life. Look, SK491 landed five minutes ago. As you walk to your departure gate, you’ll see the air stewards and stewardesses coming through on their way home and you’ll see them all chatting and laughing. For them, getting on these flights is pretty much like getting on a bus. Some of them do it two, three, four times a day. And they’re not stupid. If it wasn’t safe, they wouldn’t get on, would they?”
“Like getting on a bus,” he repeats.
“Probably an awful lot safer.”
“Well, that’s for sure.” He raises his eyebrows. “Lot of idiots on the road.”
He straightens his tie. “And it’s a big job.”
“Shame to miss out on it, for such a small thing. You’ll be fine once you get used to being up there.”
“Maybe I will. Thank you . . .”
“Louisa,” I say.
“Thank you, Louisa. You’re a very kind girl.” He looks at me speculatively. “I don’t suppose . . . you’d . . . like to go for a drink sometime?”
“I think I hear them calling your flight, sir,” I say, and I open the door to allow him to pass through.
He nods, to cover his embarrassment, makes a fuss of patting his pockets. “Right. Sure. Well . . . off I go then.”
“Enjoy those brackets.”
It takes two minutes after he has left for me to discover he has been sick all over cubicle 3.
• • •
I arrive home at a quarter past one and let myself into the silent flat. I change out of my clothes and into my pajama bottoms and a hooded sweatshirt, then open the fridge, pulling out a bottle of white, and pouring a glass. It is lip-pursingly sour. I study the label and realize I must have opened it the previous night then forgotten to stopper the bottle, and then decide it’s never a good idea to think about these things too hard and I slump down in the chair with it.
On the mantelpiece are two cards. One is from my parents, wishing me a happy birthday. That “best wishes” from Mum is as piercing as any stab wound. The other is from my sister, suggesting she and Thom come down for the weekend. It is six months old. Two voice mails are on my phone, one from the dentist. One not.
Hi Louisa. It’s Jared here. We met in the Dirty Duck? Well, we hooked up [muffled, awkward laugh]. It was just . . . you know . . . I enjoyed it. Thought maybe we could do it again? You’ve got my digits . . .
When there is nothing left in the bottle, I consider buying another one, but I don’t want to go out again. I don’t want Samir at the Mini Mart grocers to make one of his jokes about my endless bottles of pinot grigio. I don’t want to have to talk to anyone. I am suddenly bone-weary, but it is the kind of head-buzzing exhaustion that tells me that if I go to bed I won’t sleep. I think briefly about Jared and the fact that he had oddly shaped fingernails. Am I bothered about oddly shaped fingernails? I stare at the bare walls of the living room and realize suddenly that what I actually need is air. I really need air. I open the hall window and climb unsteadily up the fire escape until I am on the roof.
The first time I’d come up, nine months earlier, the estate agent showed me how the previous tenants had made a small terrace garden, dotting around a few lead planters and a small bench. “It’s not officially yours, obviously,” he’d said. “But yours is the only flat with direct access to it. I think it’s pretty nice. You could even have a party up here!” I had gazed at him, wondering if I really looked like the kind of person who held parties.
The plants have long since withered and died. I am apparently not very good at looking after things. Now I stand on the roof, staring out at London’s winking darkness below. Around me a million people are living, breathing, eating, arguing. A million lives completely divorced from mine. It is a strange sort of peace.
The sodium lights glitter as the sounds of the city filter up into the night air, engines rev, doors slam. From several miles south comes the distant brutalist thump of a police helicopter, its beam scanning the dark for some vanished miscreant in a local park. Somewhere in the distance a siren wails. Always a siren. “Won’t take much to make this feel like home,” the real estate agent had said. I had almost laughed. The city feels as alien to me as it always has. But then everywhere does these days.
I hesitate, then take a step out onto the parapet, my arms lifted out to the side, a slightly drunken tightrope walker. One foot in front of the other, edging along the concrete, the breeze making the hairs on my outstretched arms prickle. When I first moved down here, when it all first hit me hardest, I would sometimes dare myself to walk from one end of my block to the other. When I reached the other end I would laugh into the night air. You see? I am here—staying alive—right out on the edge. I am doing what you told me!
It has become a secret habit: me, the city skyline, the comfort of the dark, and the anonymity and the knowledge that up here nobody knows who I am.
I lift my head, feel the night breezes, hear the sound of laughter below and the muffled smash of a bottle breaking, see the traffic snaking up toward the city, the endless red stream of taillights, an automotive blood supply. It is always busy here, above the noise and chaos. Only the hours between 3 to 5 a.m. are relatively peaceful, the drunks having collapsed into bed, the restaurant chefs having peeled off their whites, the pubs having barred their doors. The silence of those hours is interrupted only sporadically, by the night tankers, the opening up of the Jewish bakery along the street, the soft thump of the newspaper delivery vans dropping their paper bales. I know the subtlest movements of the city because I no longer sleep.
Somewhere down there a lock-in is taking place in the White Horse, full of hipsters and East Enders, and a couple are arguing outside, and across the city the general hospital is picking up the pieces of the sick and the injured and those who have just barely scraped through another day. Up here is just the air and the dark and somewhere the FedEx freight flight from LHR to Beijing, and countless travelers, like Mr. Scotch Drinker, on their way to somewhere new.
“Eighteen months. Eighteen whole months. So when is it going to be enough?” I say into the darkness. And there it is, I can feel it boiling up again, this unexpected anger. I take two steps along, glancing down at my feet. “Because this doesn’t feel like living. It doesn’t feel like anything.”
Two steps. Two more. I will go as far as the corner tonight.
“You didn’t give me a bloody life, did you? Not really. You just smashed up my old one. Smashed it into little pieces. What am I meant to do with what’s left? When is it going to feel—”
I stretch out my arms, feeling the cool night air against my skin, and realize I am crying again.
“Fuck you, Will,” I whisper. “Fuck you for leaving me.”
Grief wells up again like a sudden tide, intense, overwhelming. And just as I feel myself sinking into it, a voice says, from the shadows: “I don’t think you should stand there.”
I half turn, and catch a flash of a small, pale face on the fire escape, dark eyes wide open. In shock, my foot slips on the parapet, my weight suddenly on the wrong side of the drop. My heart lurches a split second before my body follows. And then, like a nightmare, I am weightless, in the abyss of the night air, my legs flailing above my head as I hear the shriek that may be my own—
And then all is black.
What’s your name, sweetheart?”
A brace around my neck.
A hand feeling around my head, gently, swiftly.
I am alive. This is actually quite surprising.
“That’s it. Open your eyes. Look at me, now. Look at me. Can you tell me your name?”
I want to speak, to open my mouth, but my voice emerges muffled and nonsensical. I think I have bitten my tongue. There is blood in my mouth, warm and tasting of iron. I cannot move.
“We’re going to move you onto a spinal board, okay? You may be a bit uncomfortable for a minute, but I’m going to give you some morphine to make the pain a bit easier.” The man’s voice is calm, level, as if it were the most normal thing in the world to be lying broken on concrete, staring up at the dark sky. I want to laugh. I want to tell him how ridiculous it is that I am here. But nothing seems to work as it should.
The man’s face disappears from view. A woman in a neon jacket, her dark curly hair tied back in a ponytail, looms over me, shining a thin torch abruptly in my eyes and gazing at me with detached interest as if I were a specimen, not a person.
“Do we need to bag her?”
I want to speak but I’m distracted by the pain in my legs. Jesus, I say, but I’m not sure if I say it aloud.
“Multiple fractures. Pupils normal and reactive. BP ninety over sixty. She’s lucky she hit that awning. What are the odds of landing on a daybed, eh? . . . I don’t like that bruising though.” Cold air on my midriff, the light touch of warm fingers. “Internal bleeding?”
“Do we need a second team?”
“Can you step back please, sir? Right back?”
Another man’s voice. “I came outside for a smoke, and she dropped onto my bloody balcony. She nearly bloody landed on me.”
“Well there you go—it’s your lucky day. She didn’t.”
“I got the shock of my life. You don’t expect people to just drop out of the bloody sky. Look at my chair. That was eight hundred pounds from the Conran shop. . . . Do you think I can claim for it?”
A brief silence.
“You can do what you want, sir. Tell you what, you could charge her for cleaning the blood off your balcony while you’re at it. How about that?”
The first man’s eyes slide toward his colleague. Time slips, I tilt with it. I have fallen off a roof? My face is cold and I realize distantly that I have started to shake.
“She’s going into shock, Sam—”
A van door slides open somewhere below. And then the board beneath me moves and briefly the pain the pain the pain—everything turns black.
• • •
A siren and a swirl of blue. Always a siren in London. We are moving. Neon slides across the interior of the ambulance, hiccups and repeats, illuminating the unexpectedly packed interior. The man in the green uniform is tapping something into his phone, before turning to adjust the drip above my head. The pain has lessened—morphine?—but with consciousness comes a growing terror. It is a giant airbag inflating slowly inside me, steadily blocking out everything else. Oh, no. Oh, no.
It takes two goes for the man, his arm braced against the back of the cab, to hear me. He turns and stoops toward my face. He smells of lemons and has missed a bit when shaving.
“You okay there?”
He leans down. “Sorry. Hard to hear over the siren. We’ll be at the hospital soon.” He places a hand on mine. It is dry and warm and reassuring. I am suddenly panicked in case he decides to let go. “Just hang in there. What’s our ETA, Donna?”
I can’t say the words. My tongue fills my mouth. My thoughts are muddled, overlapping. Did I move my arms when they picked me up? I lifted my right hand, didn’t I?
“Ang I garalysed?” It emerges as a whisper.
“What?” He drops his ear to somewhere near my mouth.
“Garalysed? Ang I garalysed?”
“Paralyzed?” He hesitates, his eyes on mine, then turns and looks down at my legs. “Can you wiggle your toes?”
I try to remember how to move my feet. It seems to require several more leaps of concentration than it used to. He reaches down and lightly touches my toe, as if to remind me where they are. “Try again. There you go.”
Pain shoots up both my legs. A gasp, possibly a sob. Mine.
“You’re all right. Pain is good. I can’t say for sure, but I don’t think there’s any spinal injury. You’ve done your hip, and a few other bits besides.”
His eyes are on mine. Kind eyes. He seems to understand how much I need convincing. I feel his hand close on mine. I have never needed a human touch more.
“Really. I’m pretty sure you’re not paralyzed.”
“Oh, thang Gog,” I hear my voice, as if from afar. My eyes brim with tears. “Please don leggo og me,” I whisper.
He moves his face closer. “I am not letting go of you.”
I want to speak, but his face blurs, and I am gone again.
• • •
Afterward they tell me I fell two floors of the five, bursting through an awning, breaking my fall on a top-of-the-line, outsized, canvas-and-wicker-effect, waterproof-cushioned sun lounger on the balcony of Mr. Antony Gardiner, a copyright lawyer and neighbor I have never met. My hip smashes into two pieces and two of my ribs and my collarbone snap straight through. I break two fingers on my left hand, and a metatarsal, which pokes through the skin of my foot and causes one of the medical students to faint. My X-rays are a source of some fascination.
I keep hearing the voice of the paramedic who treated me: You never know what will happen when you fall from a great height. I am apparently very lucky. They tell me this and wait, smiling, as if I should respond with a huge grin, or perhaps a little tap dance. I don’t feel lucky. I don’t feel anything. I doze and wake and sometimes the view is the bright lights of an operating theater and then it is a quiet, still room. A nurse’s face. Snatches of conversation.
Did you see the mess the old woman on D4 made? That’s some end of a shift, eh?
You work up at the Princess Elizabeth, right? You can tell them we know how to run an ER. Hahahahaha.
You just rest now, Louisa. We’re taking care of everything. Just rest now.
The morphine makes me sleepy. They up my dose and it’s a welcome, cold trickle of oblivion.
• • •
I open my eyes to find my mother at the end of my bed.
“She’s awake. Bernard, she’s awake. Do we need to get the nurse?”
She’s changed the color of her hair, I think distantly. And then: Oh. It’s my mother. My mother doesn’t talk to me anymore.
“Oh, thank God. Thank God.” My mother reaches up and touches the crucifix around her neck. It reminds me of someone but I cannot think who. She leans forward and lightly strokes my cheek. For some reason this makes my eyes fill immediately with tears.
“Oh, my little girl.” She is leaning over me, as if to shelter me from further damage. I smell her perfume, as familiar as my own. “Oh, Lou.”
She mops my tears with a tissue.
“I got the fright of my life when they called. Are you in pain? Do you need anything? Are you comfortable? What can I get you?”
She talks so fast that I cannot answer. “We came as soon as they said. Treena’s looking after Granddad. He sends his love. Well, he sort of made that noise, you know, but we all know what he means. Oh, love, how on earth did you get yourself into this mess? What on earth were you thinking?”
She does not seem to require an answer. All I have to do is lie there. My mother dabs at her eyes, and then again at mine.
“You’re still my daughter. And . . . and I couldn’t bear it if something happened to you and we weren’t . . . you know.”
“Ngung—” I swallow over the words. My tongue feels ridiculous. I sound drunk. “I ngever wanged—”
“I know. But you made it so hard for me, Lou. I couldn’t—”
“Not now, love, eh?” Dad touches her shoulder.
Her words tail off. She looks away into the middle distance and takes my hand. “When we got the call. Oh. I thought—I didn’t know—” She is sniffing again, her handkerchief pressed to her lips. “Thank God she’s okay, Bernard.”
“Of course she is. Made of rubber, this one, eh?”
Dad looms over me. We had last spoken on the telephone two months earlier, but I have not seen him in person for the eighteen months since I left my hometown. He looks enormous and familiar and desperately, desperately tired.
“Shorry,” I whisper. I can’t think what else to say.
“Don’t be daft. We’re just glad you’re okay. Even if you do look like you’ve done six rounds with Mike Tyson. Have you actually looked in a mirror since you got here?”
I shake my head.
“Maybe . . . I might just hold off a bit longer. You know Terry Nicholls, that time he went right over his handlebars by the Mini Mart? Well, take off the mustache, and that’s pretty much what you look like. Actually”—he peers closer at my face—“now that you mention it . . .”
“We’ll bring you some tweezers tomorrow. Anyway, the next time you decide you want flying lessons, let’s head down the ol’ airstrip, yes? Jumping and flapping your arms is plainly not working for you.”
I try to smile.
They both bend over me. Their faces are strained, anxious. My parents.
“She’s got thin, Bernard. Don’t you think she’s got thin?”
Dad leans closer, and then I see how his eyes have grown a little watery. How his smile is a bit wobblier than usual.
“Ah . . . she looks beautiful, love. Believe me. You look bloody beautiful.” He squeezes my hand, then lifts it to his mouth and kisses it. My dad has never done anything like that to me in my whole life.
It is then that I realize they thought I was going to die and a sob bursts unannounced from my chest. I shut my eyes against the hot tears and feel his large, wood-roughened palm around mine.
“We’re here, sweetheart. It’s all right now. It’s all going to be okay.”
• • •
They make the fifty-mile journey every day for two weeks, catching the early train down, and then after that, come every few days. Dad gets special dispensation from work because Mum won’t travel by herself. There are, after all, all sorts in London. This is said more than once and always accompanied by a furtive glance behind her, as if a knife-wielding hoodlum is even now sneaking into the ward. Treena is staying over to keep an eye on Granddad. There is an edge to the way Mum says it that makes me think this might not be my sister’s first choice of arrangements.
Mum has brought homemade food to the hospital ever since the day we all stared at my lunch and, despite five whole minutes of intense speculation couldn’t work out what it actually was. “And in plastic trays, Bernard. Like a prison.” She prodded it sadly with a fork, then sniffed the residue. She now arrives daily with enormous sandwiches—thick slices of ham or cheese in white bloomer bread—and homemade soups in flasks (“Food you can recognize”) and feeds me like a baby. My tongue slowly returns to its normal size. Apparently I’d almost bitten through it when I landed. It’s not unusual, they tell me.
I have two operations to pin my hip, and my left foot and left arm are in plaster up to my joints. Keith, one of the porters, asks if he can sign my casts—apparently it’s bad luck to have them virgin white—and promptly writes a comment so filthy that Eveline, the Filipina nurse, has to put a plaster on it before the consultant comes around. When Keith pushes me to X-ray or to the pharmacy, he tells me the gossip from around the hospital. I could do without hearing about the patients who die slow and horrible deaths, of which there seem to be an endless number, but it keeps him happy. I sometimes wonder what he tells people about me. I am the girl who fell off a five-story building and lived. In hospital status, this apparently puts me some way above the compacted bowel in C ward, or That Daft Bint Who Accidentally Took Her Thumb Off With Pruning Shears.
It is amazing how quickly you become institutionalized. I wake, accept the ministrations of a handful of people whose faces I now recognize, try to say the right thing to the consultants, and wait for my parents to arrive. My parents keep busy with small tasks in my room and become uncharacteristically deferential in the face of the doctors. Dad apologizes repeatedly for my inability to bounce, until Mum kicks him, quite hard, in the ankle.
After the rounds are finished, Mum usually has a walk around the concourse shops downstairs and returns exclaiming in hushed tones at the number of fast-food outlets. “That one-legged man from the cardio ward, Bernard. Sitting down there stuffing his face with cheeseburgers and chips, like you wouldn’t believe.”
Dad sits and reads the local paper in the chair at the end of my bed. The first week he keeps checking it for reports of my accident. I try to tell him that in this part of the city even the double murders barely merit a News In Brief, but in Stortfold the previous week the local paper’s front page ran with “Supermarket Trolleys Left in Wrong Area of Car Park.” The week before that it was “Schoolboys Sad at State of Duck Pond,” so he is yet to be convinced.
• • •
On the Friday after the final operation to pin my hip, my mother brings a dressing gown that is one size too big for me, and a large brown paper bag of egg sandwiches. I don’t have to ask what they are; the sulfurous smell floods the room as soon as she opens the bag. My father mouths an apology, waving his hand in front of his nose. “The nurses’ll be blaming me, Josie,” he says, closing the door of my room.
“Eggs will build her up. She’s too thin. And besides, you can’t talk. You were blaming the dog for your awful smells two years after he’d died.”
“Just keeping the romance alive, love.”
Mum lowers her voice. “Treena says her last fellow put the blankets over her head when he broke wind. Can you imagine!”
Dad turns to me. “When I do it, your mother won’t even stay in the same postcode.”
There is tension in the air, even as they laugh. I can feel it. When your whole world shrinks to four walls, you become acutely attuned to slight variations in atmosphere. It’s in the way consultants turn away slightly when they are examining X-rays, or the way the nurses cover their mouths when they’re talking about someone who has just died nearby.
“What?” I say. “What is it?”
They look awkwardly at each other.
“So . . .” Mum sits on the end of my bed. “The doctor said . . . the consultant said . . . it’s not clear how you fell.”
I bite into an egg sandwich. I can pick things up with my left hand now. “Oh, that. I got distracted.”
“While walking around a roof.”
I chew for a minute.
“Is there any chance you were sleepwalking, sweetheart?”
“Dad—I’ve never sleepwalked in my life.”
“Yes, you have. There was that time when you were thirteen and you sleepwalked downstairs and ate half of Treena’s birthday cake.”
“Um. I may not have actually been asleep.”
“And there’s your blood-alcohol level. They said . . . you had drunk . . . an awful lot.”
“I had a tough night at work, and I had a drink or two and I just went up on the roof to get some air. And then I got distracted by a voice.”
“You heard a voice.”
“I was just standing on the top—looking out. I do it sometimes. And there was this girl’s voice behind me and it gave me a shock and I lost my footing.”
“I only really heard her voice.”
Dad leans forward. “You’re sure it was an actual girl? Not an imaginary . . .”
“It’s my hip that’s mashed up, Dad, not my brain.”
“They did say it was a girl who called the ambulance.” Mum touches Dad’s arm.
“So you’re saying it really was an accident,” he says.
I stop eating. They look away from each other guiltily.
“What? You . . . you think I jumped off?”
“We’re not saying anything.” Dad scratches his head. “It’s just—well—things had all gone so wrong since . . . and we hadn’t seen you for so long . . . and we were a bit surprised that you’d be up walking on the roof of a building in the wee small hours. You used to be afraid of heights.”
“I used to be engaged to a man who thought it was normal to calculate how many calories he’d burned while he slept. Jesus. This is why you’ve been so nice to me? You think I tried to kill myself?”
“It’s just he was asking us all sorts. . . .”
“Who was asking what?”
“The psychiatrist bloke. They just want to make sure you’re okay, love. We know things have been all—well, you know—since—”
“They’re putting you on the waiting list to see someone. To talk, you know. And we’ve had a long chat with the doctors and you’re coming home with us. Just while you recover. You can’t stay by yourself in that flat of yours. It’s—”
“You’ve been in my flat?”
“Well, we had to fetch your things.”
There is a long silence. I think of them standing in my doorway, my mother’s hands tight on her bag as she surveys the unwashed bed linen, the empty wine bottles lined up in a row on the mantelpiece, the solitary half-bar of Fruit and Nut in the fridge. I picture them shaking their heads, looking at each other. Are you sure we’ve got the right place, Bernard?
“Right now you need to be with your family. Just till you’re back on your feet.”
I want to say I’ll be fine in my flat, no matter what they think of it. I want to do my job and come home and not think until my next shift. I want to say I can’t go back to Stortfold and be That Girl again, The One Who. I don’t want to have to feel the weight of my mother’s carefully disguised disapproval, of my father’s cheerful determination that it’s all okay, everything is just fine, as if saying it enough times will actually make it okay. I don’t want to pass Will’s house every day, to think about what I was part of, the thing that will always be there.
But I don’t say any of it. Because suddenly I’m tired and everything hurts and I just can’t fight anymore.
• • •
Dad brings me home two weeks later in his work van. There is only room for two in the front, so Mum has stayed behind to prepare the house, and as the motorway speeds by beneath us, I find my stomach tightening nervously.
The cheerful streets of my hometown feel foreign to me now. I look at them with a distant, analytical eye, noting how small everything appears, how tired, how twee. Even the castle looks smaller, perched on top of the hill. I realize this is how Will must have seen it when he first came home after his accident, and push the thought away. As we drive down our street, I find myself sinking slightly in my seat. I don’t want to make polite conversation with neighbors, to explain myself. I don’t want to be judged for what I did.
“You okay?” Dad turns, as if he guesses something of what’s going through my head.
“Good girl.” He puts a hand briefly on my shoulder.
Mum is already at the door as we pull up. I suspect she has actually been standing by the window for the past half hour. Dad puts one of my bags on the step and then comes back to help me out, hoisting the other over his shoulder.
I place my cane carefully on the paving stones, and I feel the twitching of curtains behind me as I make my way slowly up the path. Look who it is, I can hear them whispering. What do you think she’s done now?
Dad steers me forward, watching my feet carefully, as if they might suddenly shoot out and go somewhere they shouldn’t. “Okay there?” he keeps saying. “Not too fast now.”
I can see Granddad hovering behind Mum in the hall, wearing his checked shirt and his good blue jumper. Nothing has changed. The wallpaper is the same. The hall carpet is the same, the lines in the worn pile visible from where Mum must have vacuumed that morning. I can see my old blue anorak hanging on the hook. Eighteen months. I feel as if I have been away for a decade.
“Don’t rush her,” Mum says, her hands pressed together. “You’re going too fast, Bernard.”
“She’s hardly flipping Mo Farah. If she goes any slower we’ll be moonwalking.”
“Watch those steps. Should you stand behind her, Bernard, coming up the steps? You know, in case she falls backward?”
“I know where the steps are,” I say through gritted teeth. “I only lived here for twenty-six years.”
“Watch she doesn’t catch herself on that lip there, Bernard. You don’t want her to smash the other hip.”
Oh, God, I think. Is this what it was like for you, Will? Every single day?
And then my sister is in the doorway, pushing past Mum. “Oh, for God’s sake, Mum. Come on, Hopalong. You’re turning us into a freaking sideshow.”
Treena wedges her arm under my armpit and turns briefly to glare at the neighbors, her eyebrows raised as if to say really? I can almost hear the swishing of curtains as they close.
“Bunch of bloody rubberneckers. Anyway, hurry up. I promised Thomas he could see your scars before I take him to youth club. God, how much weight have you lost? Your boobs must look like two tangerines in a pair of socks.”
It is hard to laugh and walk at the same time. Thomas runs to hug me so that I have to stop and put a hand out against the wall to keep my balance as we collide. “Did they really cut you open and put you back together?” he says. His head comes up to my chest. He is missing four front teeth. “Grandpa says they probably put you back together all the wrong way. And God only knows how we’ll tell the difference.”
“I was joking.”
“Louisa.” Granddad’s voice is thick and hesitant. He reaches forward unsteadily and hugs me and I hug him back. He pulls away, his old hands gripping my arms surprisingly tightly, and frowns at me, a mock anger.
“I know, Daddy. I know. But she’s home now,” says Mum.
“You’re back in your old room,” says Dad. “I’m afraid we redecorated with Transformers wallpaper for Thom. You don’t mind the odd Autobot and Predacon, right?”
“I had worms in my bottom,” says Thomas. “Mum says I’m not to talk about it outside the house. Or put my fingers up my—”
“Oh, good Lord,” says Mum.
“Welcome home, Lou,” says Dad, and promptly drops my bag on my foot.
Looking back, for the first nine months after Will’s death I was in a kind of daze. I went straight to Paris and simply didn’t go home, giddy with freedom, with the appetites that Will had stirred in me. I got a job at a bar favored by expats where they didn’t mind my terrible French, and I grew better at it. I rented a tiny attic room in the 16th, above a Middle Eastern restaurant, and I would lie awake at night and listen to the sound of the late drinkers and the early morning deliveries and every day I felt like I was living someone else’s life.
Those early months, it was as if I had lost a layer of skin—I woke up laughing, or crying. I felt everything more intensely, saw everything as if a filter had been removed. I ate new foods, walked strange streets, spoke to people in a language that wasn’t mine.
Sometimes I felt haunted by him, as if I were seeing it all through his eyes, hearing his voice in my ear.
What do you think of that, then, Clark?
I told you you’d love this.
Eat it! Try it! Go on!
I felt lost without our daily routines. It took weeks for my hands not to feel useless without daily contact with his body: the soft shirt I would button; the warm, motionless hands I would wash gently; the silky hair I could still feel between my fingers. I missed his voice, his abrupt, hard-earned laugh, the feel of his lips against my fingers, the way his eyelids would lower when he was about to drop off to sleep. My mother, still aghast at what I had been part of, had told me that while she loved me, she could not reconcile this Louisa with the daughter she had raised. So with the loss of my family as well as the man I had loved, every thread that had linked me to who I was had been abruptly cut. I felt as if I had simply floated off, untethered, to some unknown universe.
So I acted out a new life. I made casual, arm’s-length friendships with other travelers: young English students on gap years; Americans retracing the steps of literary heroes, certain that they would never return to the Midwest; wealthy young bankers; day-trippers; a constantly changing cast that drifted in and through and past, escapees from other lives. I smiled and I chatted and I worked and I told myself I was doing what he had wanted. I had to take some comfort, at least, in that. Didn’t I?
Winter loosened its grip and the spring was beautiful. Then almost overnight I woke up one morning and realized I had fallen out of love with the city. Or, at least, I didn’t feel Parisian enough to stay. The stories of the expats began to sound wearyingly similar, the Parisians started to seem unfriendly, or, at least, I noticed, several times a day, the myriad ways in which I would never quite fit in. The city, compelling as it was, felt like a glamorous couture dress I had bought in haste but that didn’t quite fit me after all. I handed in my notice and went traveling around Europe.
No two months had ever left me feeling more inadequate. I was lonely almost all the time. I hated not knowing where I was going to sleep each night, was permanently anxious about train timetables and currency, and had difficulty making friends when I didn’t trust anyone I met. And what could I say about myself, anyway? When people asked me, I could give them only the most cursory details. All the stuff that was important or interesting about me was what I couldn’t share. Without someone to talk to, every sight I saw—whether it was the Trevi Fountain or a canal in Amsterdam—felt simply like a name on a list that I needed to check off. I spent the last week on a beach in Greece that reminded me too much of a beach I had been on with Will only months before, and finally after a week of sitting on the sand fending off bronzed men who all seemed to be called Dmitri and trying to tell myself I was actually having a good time I gave up and returned to Paris. Mostly because that was the first time it had occurred to me that I had nowhere else to go.
For two weeks I slept on the sofa of a girl I’d worked with at the bar, while I tried to figure out what to do next. Recalling a conversation I’d had with Will about careers, I wrote to several colleges about fashion courses, but I had no portfolio of work to show them and they rebuffed me politely. The course I had originally won after Will died was awarded to someone else because I had failed to defer. I could apply again next year, the administrator said, in the tones of someone who knew I wouldn’t.
I looked online at jobs websites and realized that, despite everything I had been through, I was still unqualified for any of the kinds of jobs I might actually be interested in doing. And then by chance, just as I was wondering what to do next, Michael Lawler, Will’s lawyer, rang me and suggested it was time to do something with the money Will had left me. It was the excuse to move that I needed. He helped me negotiate a deal on a scarily overpriced two-bedroom flat on the edge of the Square Mile—a neighborhood I chose largely because I remembered Will once talking about the wine bar on the corner and it made me feel a bit closer to him—and there was enough money left over with which to furnish it. Then six weeks later I came back to England, got a job at the Shamrock and Clover, slept with a man called Phil whom I would never see again, and waited to feel as if I had really started living.
Nine months on I was still waiting.
• • •
I didn’t go out much that first week home. I was sore and grew tired quickly, so it was easy to lie in bed and doze, wiped out by extrastrength painkillers, and tell myself that letting my body recover was all that mattered. In a weird way, being back in our little family house suited me; it was the first place I had managed to sleep more than four hours at a stretch since I had left; it was small enough that I could always reach out for a wall to support myself. Mum fed me, Granddad kept me company (Treena had gone back to college, taking Thom with her), and I watched a lot of daytime television, marveling at its never-ending advertisements for loan companies and stairlifts, and its preoccupation with minor celebrities whom the better part of a year abroad had left me unable to recognize. It was like being in a little cocoon, one that, admittedly, had a whacking great elephant squatting in its corner.
We did not talk about anything that might upset this delicate equilibrium. I would watch whatever celebrity news that daytime television served up and then say at supper, “Well, what about that Shayna West, then, eh?” And Mum and Dad would leap on the topic gratefully, remarking that she was a trollop or had nice hair or that she was no better than she should be. We covered Bargains That Could Be Found in Your Attic (“I always wonder what that Victorian planter of your mother’s would have been worth . . . ugly old thing”) and Ideal Homes in the Country (“I wouldn’t wash a dog in that bathroom”). I did not think beyond each mealtime, beyond the basic challenges of getting dressed and brushing my teeth and completing whatever tiny tasks my mother set me (“You know, love, when I’m out, if you could sort out your washing, I’ll do it with my coloreds”).
But like a creeping tide, the outside world steadily insisted on intruding. I heard the neighbors asking questions of my mother as she hung out the washing. “Your Lou home, then, is she?” And Mum’s uncharacteristically curt response: “She is.”
I found myself avoiding the rooms in the house from which I could see the castle. But I knew it was there, the people in it living, breathing links to Will. Sometimes I wondered what had happened to them. While in Paris I had been forwarded a letter from Mrs. Traynor, thanking me formally for everything I had done for her son. “I am conscious that you did everything you could.” But that was it. That family had gone from being my whole life to a ghostly remnant of a time I wouldn’t allow myself to remember.
Now, as our street sat moored in the shadow of the castle for several hours every evening, I felt the Traynors’ presence like a rebuke.
I’d been there for two weeks before I realized that Mum and Dad no longer went to their social club. “Isn’t it Tuesday?” I asked on the third week as we sat around the dinner table. “Shouldn’t you be gone by now?”
They glanced at each other. “Ah, no. We’re fine here,” Dad said, chewing on a piece of his pork chop.
“I’m fine by myself, honestly,” I told them. “I’m much better now. And I’m quite happy watching television.” I secretly longed to sit, unobserved, with nobody else in the room. I had barely been left alone for more than half an hour at a time since I’d come home. “Really. Go out and enjoy yourselves. Don’t mind me.”
“We . . . we don’t really go to the club anymore,” said Mum, not looking at me as she sliced through a potato.
“People . . . they had a lot to say. About what went on.” Dad shrugged. “In the end it was easier just to stay out of it.” The silence that followed this disclosure lasted a full six minutes.
And there were other, more concrete reminders of the life I had left behind. Ones that wore skin-tight running pants with special wicking properties.
It was on the fourth morning that Patrick jogged past our house when I realized it might be more than coincidence. I had heard his voice the first day and limped blearily to the window, peering through the blind. And there he was below me, stretching out his hamstrings while talking to a girl with a blond ponytail and clad in matching blue Lycra so tight I could pretty much figure out what she’d had for breakfast. They looked like two Olympians missing a bobsled. I stood back from the window in case he looked up and saw me, and within a minute they were gone again, jogging down the road, backs erect, legs pumping, like a pair of glossy turquoise carriage ponies.
Two days later I was getting dressed when I heard them again. Patrick was saying something loudly about carb loading, and this time the girl flicked a suspicious gaze toward my house, as if she were wondering why they had stopped in exactly the same place twice.
On the third day I was in the front room with Granddad when they arrived. “We should practice sprints,” Patrick was saying loudly. “Tell you what, you go to the fourth lamppost and back and I’ll time you. Two-minute intervals. Go!”
Granddad looked at me, and then rolled his eyes meaningfully.
“Has he been doing this the whole time I’ve been back?”
Granddad’s eyes rolled pretty much into the back of his head.
I watched through the net curtains as Patrick fixed his eyes on his stopwatch, his best side presented to my window. He was wearing a black fleece zip-up top and matching Lycra shorts, and as he stood, a few feet from the other side of the curtain, I was able to gaze at him, quietly amazed that this was someone I had been sure, for so long, I’d loved.
“Keep going!” he yelled, looking up from his stopwatch. And like an obedient gun dog, the girl touched the lamppost beside him and bolted away again. “Forty-two point three-eight seconds,” he said approvingly when she returned, panting. “I reckon you could shave another point five of a second off that.”
“That’s for your benefit,” said my mother, who had walked in bearing two mugs.
“I did wonder.”
“His mother asked me in the supermarket were you back and I said yes, you were. Don’t look at me like that—I could hardly lie to the woman.” She nodded toward the window. “That one’s had her boobs done. They’re the talk of Stortfold. Apparently you could rest two cups of tea on them.” She stood beside me for a moment. “You know they’re engaged?”
I waited for the pang, but it was so mild it could have been wind. “They look . . . well suited.”
My mother stood there for a moment, watching him. “He’s not a bad sort, Lou. You just . . . changed.” She handed me a mug and turned away.
• • •
Finally, on the morning he stopped to do push-ups on the pavement outside the house, I opened the front door and stepped out. I leaned against the porch, my arms folded across my chest, watching until he looked up.
“I wouldn’t stop there for too long. Next door’s dog is a bit partial to that bit of pavement.”
“Lou!” he exclaimed, as if I were the very last person he expected to see standing outside my own house, which he had visited several times a week for the seven years we had been together. “Well. I . . . I’m surprised to see you back. I thought you were off to conquer the big wide world!”
His fiancée, who was doing push-ups beside him, looked up and then back down at the pavement. It might have been my imagination, but her buttocks may have clenched even more tightly. Up, down, she bobbed, furiously. Up and down. I found myself worrying slightly for the welfare of her new bosom.
He bounced to his feet. “This is Caroline, my fiancée.” He kept his eyes on me, perhaps waiting for some kind of reaction. “We’re training for the next Ironman. We’ve done two together already.”
“How . . . romantic,” I said.
“Well, Caroline and I feel it’s good to do things together,” he said.
“So I see,” I replied. “And his and hers turquoise Lycra!”
“Oh. Yeah. Team colors.”
There was a short silence.
I gave a little air punch. “Go, team!”
Caroline sprang to her feet and began to stretch out her thigh muscles, folding her leg behind her like a stork. She nodded toward me, the least civility she could reasonably get away with.
“You’ve lost weight,” he said.
“Yeah, well. A saline-drip diet will do that to you.”
“I heard you had an. . . . accident.” He cocked his head sideways, sympathetically.
“News travels fast.”
“Still. I’m glad you’re okay.” He sniffed, looked down the road. “It must have been hard for you this past year. You know. Doing what you did and all.”
And there it was. I tried to keep control of my breathing. Caroline resolutely refused to look at me, extending her leg in a hamstring stretch.
“Anyway . . . congratulations on the marriage.”
He surveyed his future wife proudly, lost in admiration of her sinewy leg. “Well, it’s like they say—you just know when you know.” He gave me a faux-apologetic smile. And that was what finished me off.
“I’m sure you did. And I guess you’ve got plenty put aside to pay for the wedding? They’re not cheap, are they?”
They both looked up at me.
“What with selling my story to the newspapers. What did they pay you, Pat? A couple of thousand? Treena never could find out the exact figure. Still, Will’s death should be good for a few matching Lycra onesies, right?”
The way Caroline’s face shot toward his told me this was one particular part of Patrick’s history that he had not yet gotten around to sharing.
He stared at me, two pinpricks of color bleeding onto his face. “That was nothing to do with me.”
“Of course not. Nice to see you, anyway, Pat. Good luck with the wedding, Caroline! I’m sure you’ll be the . . . the . . . firmest bride around.” I turned and walked slowly back inside. I closed the door, resting against it, my heart thumping, until I could be sure that they had both finally jogged on.
“Arse,” said Granddad as I limped back into the living room, and then again, glancing dismissively at the window: “Arse.” He chuckled.
I stared at him. And then, completely unexpectedly, I found I had started to laugh, for the first time in as long as I could remember.
• • •
“So did you decide what you’re going to do? When you’re better?”
I was lying on my bed. Treena was calling from college, while she waited for Thomas to come out of his football club. I stared up at the ceiling, on which Thomas had stuck a whole galaxy of Day-Glo stickers that apparently nobody could remove without bringing half the ceiling with them.
“You’ve got to do something. You can’t sit around here on your backside for all eternity.”
“I won’t sit on my backside. Besides, my hip still hurts. The physio said I’m better off lying down.”
“Mum and Dad are wondering what you’re going to do. There are no jobs in Stortfold.”
“Treen, I just fell off a building. I’m recuperating.”
“And before that you were wafting around traveling. And then you were working in a bar until you knew what you wanted to do. You’ll have to sort out your head at some point. If you’re not going back to school, then you have to figure out what it is you’re actually going to do with your life. I’m just saying. Anyway, if you’re going to stay in Stortfold, you need to rent out that London flat. Mum and Dad can’t support you forever.”
“This from the woman who has been supported by the Bank of Mum and Dad for the past eight years.”
“I’m in full-time education. That’s different. So anyway, I went through your bank statements while you were in hospital and after I paid all your bills, I worked out that you’ve got about fifteen hundred pounds left, including statutory sick pay. By the way, what the hell were all those transatlantic phone calls? They cost you a fortune.”
“None of your business.”
“So I made you a list of estate agents in the area who do rentals. And then I thought maybe we could take another look at college applications. Someone might have dropped out of that course you wanted.”
“Treen. You’re making me tired.”
“No point hanging around. You’ll feel better once you’ve got some focus.”
For all that it was annoying, there was also something reassuring about my sister nagging at me. Nobody else dared to. It was as if my parents still believed there was something very wrong at the heart of me, and that I must be treated with kid gloves. Mum laid out my washing, neatly folded, on the end of my bed and cooked me three meals a day, and when I caught her watching me she would smile, an awkward half smile, which covered everything we didn’t want to say to each other. Dad took me to my physio appointments and sat beside me on the sofa to watch television and didn’t even take the Mickey out of me. Treen was the only one who treated me like she always had.
“You know what I’m going to say, don’t you?”
I turned over onto my side, wincing.
“I do. And don’t.”
“Well, you know what Will would have said. You had a deal. You can’t back out of it.”
“Okay. That’s it, Treen. We’re done with this conversation.”
“Fine. Thom’s just coming out of the changing rooms. See you Friday!” she said, as if we had just been talking about music or where she was going on holiday, or soap.
And I was left staring at the ceiling.
You had a deal.
Yeah. And look how that turned out.
• • •
For all Treen moaned at me, in the weeks that had passed since I’d come home I had made some progress. I’d stopped using the cane, which had made me feel around eighty-nine years old, and which I had managed to leave behind in almost every place I’d visited since coming home. Most mornings I took Granddad for a walk around the park, at Mum’s request. The doctor had instructed him to take daily exercise but when she had followed him one day she had found he was simply walking to the corner shop to buy a bumper pack of pork rinds and then eating them on a slow walk home again.
We walked slowly, both of us with a limp, and neither of us with any real place to be.
Mum kept suggesting we do the grounds of the castle “for a change of scene,” but I ignored her, and as the gate shut behind us each morning Granddad nodded firmly in the direction of the park anyway. It wasn’t just because this way was shorter, or closer to the betting shop. I think he knew I didn’t want to go back there. I wasn’t ready. I wasn’t sure I would ever be ready.
We did two slow circuits of the duck pond, and sat on a bench in the watery spring sunshine and watched the toddlers and their parents feeding the fat ducks, and the teenagers smoking and yelling and whacking each other in the helpless combat of early courtship. We took a stroll over to the bookies so Granddad could lose three pounds on an each-way bet on a horse called Wag the Dog. Then as he crumpled up his betting slip and threw it in the bin, I said I’d buy him a jam doughnut from the supermarket.
“Oh fat,” he said, as we stood in the bakery section.
I frowned at him.
“Oh fat,” he said, pointing at our doughnuts, and laughed.
“Oh. Yup. That’s what we’ll tell Mum. Low-fat doughnuts.”
Mum said his new medication made him giggly. I had decided there were worse things that could happen to you.
Granddad was still giggling at his own joke as we queued up at the checkout. I kept my head down, digging in my pockets for change. I was thinking about whether I would help Dad with the garden that weekend. So it took a minute to grasp what was being said in whispers behind me.
“It’s the guilt. They say she tried to jump off a block of flats.”
“Well, you would, wouldn’t you? I know I couldn’t live with myself.”
“I’m surprised she can show her face around here.”
I stood very still, my hands rigid in my pockets.
“You know poor Josie Clark is still mortified. She takes confession every single week and you know that woman is as blameless as a line of clean laundry.”
Granddad was pointing at the doughnuts and mouthing oh fat at the checkout girl.
She smiled politely. “Eighty-six pence, please.”
“The Traynors have never been the same.”
“Well, it destroyed them, didn’t it?”
“Eighty-six pence, please.”
It took me several seconds to register that the checkout girl was looking at me, waiting. I pulled a handful of coins from my pocket. My fingers fumbled as I tried to sort through them.
“You’d think Josie wouldn’t dare leave her in sole charge of her granddaddy, wouldn’t you?”
“You don’t think she’d—”
“Well, you don’t know. She’s done it the once, after all . . .”
My cheeks were flaming. My money clattered onto the counter. Granddad was still repeating, “Oh fat. Oh fat.” at the bemused checkout girl, waiting for her to get the joke. I pulled at his sleeve. “Come on, Granddad, we have to go.”
“Oh fat,” he insisted, again.
“Right.” She said, and smiled kindly.
“Please, Granddad.” I felt hot and dizzy, like I might faint. They might have still been talking but my ears were ringing so loudly I couldn’t tell.
“’Bye-bye,” he said.
“’Bye then,” said the girl.
“Nice,” said Granddad as we emerged into the sunlight. Then, looking at me: “Why you crying?”
• • •
So here is the thing about being involved in a catastrophic, life-changing event. You think it’s just the catastrophic, life-changing event that you’re going to have to deal with: the flashbacks, the sleepless nights, the endless running back over events in your head, asking yourself if you had done the right thing, said the things you should have said, whether you could have changed things had you done them even a degree differently.
My mother had told me that being there with Will at the end would affect the rest of my life, and I had thought she meant me, psychologically. I thought she meant the guilt I would have to learn to get over, the grief, the insomnia, the weird, inappropriate bursts of anger, the endless internal dialogue with someone who wasn’t even there. But what I now discovered is that it wasn’t just me. I had become that person and in a digital age I would be that person forever. It was in that faint swivel of heads when you walked through a busy street—“Is that—?” Even if I managed to wipe the whole thing from my memory, I would never be allowed to disassociate from Will’s death. My name would always be tied to his. People would form judgments about me based on the most cursory knowledge—or sometimes no knowledge at all—and there was nothing I could do about it.
I cut my hair into a bob. I changed the way I dressed, bagged up everything that had ever made me distinctive, and stuffed those bags into the back of my wardrobe. I adopted Treena’s uniform of jeans and a generic tee. Now, when I read newspaper stories about the bank teller who had stolen a fortune, the woman who had killed her child, the sibling who had disappeared, I found myself not shuddering in horror, as I once might have, but wondering instead at the part of the story that hadn’t made it into print.
What I felt with them was a weird kinship. I was tainted. The world around me knew it. Worse, I had started to know it too.
• • •
I tucked what remained of my dark hair into a beanie and put on my sunglasses and then I walked to the library, doing everything I could not to let my limp show, even though it made my jaw ache with concentration.
Reading Group Guide
In After You, Jojo Moyes’s sequel to her bestselling novel Me Before You, we meet Louisa Clark two years after her life with Will Traynor ended. Since her six-month stint caring for paraplegic Will, Lou has been reeling, and struggling to truly accept his death. She’s working in an airport bar that requires a humiliating costume, living on her own in a London flat, and drinking copiously to drown her sorrows. Despite all that Will taught her, Lou can’t quite figure out where to go next.
During one lonely night looking out over London from her rooftop, she falls—a major accident that sends her to the hospital with broken bones and a deep sense of shame. Upon her release, she moves in with her parents, who are increasingly concerned about her state of mind. When she’s well enough, they allow her to go home to her flat—with the caveat that she must start attending a weekly support group.
Lou reluctantly agrees to try out the Moving On Circle, where she slowly learns to open up—about her grief and to other people. And there she meets Sam, a handsome paramedic, who may be the one man who can truly understand her devastation. Then Lily, a figure from Will’s past, shows up at Lou’s door. Soon she will become a dominant presence in Lou’s life, commandeering her plans for the future. Lou finds herself drawn to the troubled Lily, and over time, warms up to her unpredictable but often winning ways. These new relationships start to give Lou’s once-floundering life shape and a renewed sense of purpose. But when Lou’s friend Nathan offers her a potential job opportunity in New York City, with the chance to start over and launch a real career, Lou must decide what kind of life she truly wants to lead. . . .
Lou is as lovable and relatable as ever, and the rambunctious Clark family is brought vividly and hilariously to life. Emotionally charged and devastatingly romantic, After You explores the ways we can rebuild ourselves after unthinkable loss. Jojo Moyes once again dazzles with her trademark storytelling, humor, and insight into the way we heal and move on.
1. What is Louisa’s emotional state at the start of this book? What has transpired for her between Will’s death and now?
2. Lou’s gig at the Shamrock and Clover is a great source of humor in the book. What other function does this particular job play in the book and how does it serve the story?
3. Lou worries that after her accident everyone thinks she’s suicidal. How would you describe her mental state and her role in the fall? Is she responsible, and why or why not?
4. Throughout the book Lou and her loved ones question her life decisions, and if she is in fact “living” at all after Will’s death. What is holding her back and what ultimately allows her to make changes?
5. Lou finds herself attracted to Sam, but she isn’t always straightforward with him about her feelings. What keeps her from being intimate with him?
6. How are the Traynors dealing with their complex grief in different ways?
7. How does the Moving On Circle help Lou? What insights does she take away from her experience?
8. In Chapter 19, the point of view changes to Lily’s perspective. Why does the author make this shift and how does it serve the overall plot of the book?
9. A running theme in the novel is about personal freedom and how Lou, Treena, and their mother all feel trapped by their respective situations. How do they learn from one another? How might they each benefit from having more freedom?
10. What does Lou learn from her relationship with Sam and how might these lessons serve her in her new life?
Barnes & Noble Review Interview with Jojo Moyes
Me Before You struck a chord with millions of readers worldwide. A deeply romantic and surprisingly whimsical take on assisted dying, author Jojo Moyes took one of the thorniest political issues of our time and realized it, burrowing behind the headlines to produce a remarkably moving and humane treatment in the story of Lou and Will.
Now Jojo Moyes has chosen to revisit Lou this time without Will in a sequel, After You. In the interim she has published another massively successful love story, The One Plus One.
I called her to talk about After You, and she told me how nervous she was about the reception of this new novel one in which she was true to her own authorial voice, and to Lou as a character.
She was warm and approachable. An edited transcript of our conversation is below. Hope Whitmore
The Barnes & Noble Review: I liked After You. You said in the introduction that you felt the "need" to revisit Lou Clark and her family, and also Will's family, the Traynors. Need is an interesting word; please, can you tell me more about this?
Jojo Moyes: Well, it's always interesting after finishing a book because you do go through a period of mourning, you know? You miss these characters that you have spent so much time with over the previous year or two years, but usually it goes away quite swiftly, because I often have my brain focused on the next thing.
But in this case, I received so many emails and messages from people who wanted to know about Lou or wanted to tell me how they felt about the book. Then I started work on the script for the movie, so it never really left me the way that other books did.
I remember waking up very early and thinking vividly, I wonder what happened to her? And once I had an idea I couldn't see a reason not to revisit her.
I have always been a bit wary of sequels, though, because I think unless you've got a very strong idea it can just feel like a rehash.
BNR: Was it frightening, after the huge impact of Me Before You? JM: It really was. At first I thought that because I knew the characters really well, writing a sequel would be easy. [Laughs] But then when I started I found that it was almost paralyzing at points, knowing that people would have very strong opinions about what happened to Lou, and I couldn't be sure if what I had planned for her was going to agree with people, if you like.
So I had to really shut off what other people might think and follow my own path with it. It is always a huge relief when people say that they do like it.
BNR: In this novel we don't have Will, who was a huge part of Me Before You. Did you miss him when you wrote After You?
JM: That was the great challenge, because he was such a compelling character both to write and to read about.
With Sam, who becomes Lou's love interest in this book, I knew I had to create somebody who was compelling but who was also nothing like Will, because anybody who was even remotely like him would just end up being compared to him and be in his shadow.
Sam changed shape a few times before I was happy with who he was; usually, once I fix a couple of images in my head I have somebody. With Sam there were a couple of things I needed to change and then I "got" him, and once I knew who he was it became so much easier.
But revisiting the family was very easy because I knew very clearly how they would have reacted to events in the previous book, but introducing new characters was tougher.
BNR: So, with Sam, what did he begin as? Did he begin as a paramedic?
JM: Originally they were both paramedics. At first I wanted Lou to be a paramedic, so I have three chapters where she's working with him, but then I discovered that the more I wrote, the more it sounded like a bad episode of Casualty. [Laughs]
Having him and her both so involved in the world of medicine just threw the book off balance. After a few months of toying with it, I just stripped out her job and started her again.
And once I knew where Lou was working t made perfect sense to me, because as a symbol of quite how stuck she is, there's nothing to beat the poignancy of her standing there at the airport, watching everybody else fly off day after the day to do something exciting with their lives. The fact she's the one watching them while standing on the ground was quite a powerful symbol of where she was.
BNR: There is a character, Lily, who brings quite a lot of the vibrancy and energy Will brought to Me Before You, but quite a lot of the demons as well. Was her Will-like nature intentional?
JM: Yes it was.
It sounds a bit odd, but I was feeling concerned that I couldn't propel Lou away from the shadow of what had happened to Will so when Lily arrives on the page it was a huge relief to introduce her, because you know, she just crackled.
She was just so easy to write because she is this ball of energy who externalizes everything; she doesn't swallow anything, her rejection, her anger, her unhappiness she just pushes it all outwards and it is, you're right, a very Will-like response.
I felt it really bought the book to life once she came in because, well, it just made everything energized at a point where I was concerned it might be too slow.
And it gave Lou a focus, almost a parental responsibility, and I was very interested in the underlying focus of her life and her caring nature.
In Me Before You, Will did the thing that he wanted to do, and that was very much his right, but you can't pretend that these huge life decisions won't have an effect on everybody else around you, so his family and Lou's family all bear the brunt of his decision in different ways.
With Lily, her mother's decision to keep trying to find herself, or find something better, has a huge impact on her daughter that she refuses to acknowledge. So I'm interested in the fact that Lou is the antithesis of that. She understands that you do have to be responsible, but she also is almost too much the other way. She takes too much responsibility for other people's lives and is reluctant to push forward with her own.
BNR: You mention Lily's mother. I thought she was brilliantly drawn, so compellingly awful.
JM: Well, you know, I've known people like her, and I've watched them and I've watched their children going from being quite happy little souls to miserable adolescents. Some people are physically unable to question their own behavior, and I find it extraordinary and heartbreaking.
But I was interested in the impact of that because we're encouraged in today's world to do the thing you want to do and live your life because "You Only Live Once" all those kind of messages. The fact is that if you have children, you can't just set off and do this thing that you want to do. There's always a cost, so I just wanted to take a little look at that cost.
BNR: And something else I found interesting was that Lily and Lou have both suffered some sort of sexual assault, and this sort of sexual violence against women is very common now. Was this something you wanted to draw attention to?
JM: Well, a little. I just feel that the world is changing in a very strange way, and there's a sort of anger among a lot of men; a sort of desire to put women in their place, which I find really disturbing. It didn't seem to exist in the same way when I was say, Lily's age, and the fact is that sexual assault and sexual violence against women is something that most of us have to factor into our daily existence.
I don't know any woman who lives in a city who doesn't calculate what's the last safe time to get public transport or what roads they wouldn't walk down by themselves, or consider who is it safe to give a number to, you know? Would you send a picture of yourself naked to somebody if there's even the smallest possibility that it might bounce onto the Internet at some point? All these things are just a factor of young women's lives, and I think that because I write commercial fiction doesn't mean I have to ignore the slightly grubby reality of life and what's out there.
I know so many women who have had to deal with something on that scale. I think it's almost the exception not to have dealt with any of it.
BNR: You mentioned earlier that you wrote the screenplay for Me Before You. [It is being released as a film starring Emilia Clark, Charles Dance, and Sam Claflin in June 2016.]
JM: Yes I did, I've written the film script for MGM, and I was there on set every day for the shoot, and it's in the edit suite now, so I'm looking forward to seeing the finished result very soon.
BNR: How do you feel about Emilia Clarke playing Lou?
JM: I love her. She was so Lou from the moment I saw her that I couldn't have asked for her. When they told me who they were talking to, I just couldn't see it, because I just knew her as the Khaleesi in Game of Thrones, but then when you see her in real life and you watch her as Lou, it makes perfect sense.
She has a natural warmth, and everyone could feel it as soon as she came along. There's something just kind of a bit special about her. She just radiates warmth, and she's very open and funny and very sensitive, so I'm really hoping that comes across in the film.
BNR: In the end of Me Before You, we leave Lou in the café in Paris and she's heartbroken, though her life seems full of promise; but After You opens with her in a really awful place. It feels as if you're almost trying to dismantle the message of Me Before You.
JM: Yes. I think it's an interesting phrase you used: "Dismantling it."
I think I did. Because I felt that After You had to be a very honest book, and whenever I thought about what would happen to Lou after Me Before You, the one thing I felt quite strongly was that she wouldn't come out of that experience unscathed. I think that to be part of what she was part of and to be acquiescent in the death of the person you love more than anybody else in the world is a huge burden, a huge thing to have to slowly come to terms with, and my feeling was that at first she would have bounced off and felt that she was going to fulfill everything that he would have wanted, but then reality would have kicked in, and she would have had to consider every day her part in it.
And the kind of sensitive soul Lou is, I thought she would question it quite a lot and it's an impossible thing, because she can't get any answers, so that was a really awful position that he left her in, and she wouldn't have been able to bounce back, or at least not immediately.
BNR: I was quite surprised by the end of Me Before You. Although, you've written before about happy endings, and Daisy Goodwin, who was judging the women's prize said, "There's so much misery in women's books." But you wrote about this and said that women get dismissed if they write about happy things, and you said quite coyly "Current wisdom suggests you cannot be taken seriously if you include a happy ending."
How much truth is there in that?
JM: Well, I don't know when I gave that quote, I suspect it was before Me Before You came out [it was in 2011] but the fact is, that's the only book in thirteen or fourteen that I've written with a properly sad ending, and you know what, it's sold more than anything else, so there is probably some truth in it.
Although I don't know. I think it has a very sad part of the ending, but I don't think it's an unequivocally sad ending. Maybe I'm just being Pollyanna-ish about it, but, when I wrote it, weirdly, I didn't think of it as a very sad ending, I felt it was sad in that writing the final letter made me cry a lot, but also I felt it was about the giving of something, and I suppose that's what I took away.
I think that most people in After You get a happy ending, if not a bittersweet ending. I don't have a fixed opinion of whether I should do "happy or sad" when I start it has to be whatever the character requires.
BNR: Because The One Plus One is unequivocally happy, it's the opposite. The lead character Jess has all these crises, but you know, reading, that it will all be OK.
JM: Well, you know, I was going to kill the dog in The One Plus One. Then my husband read it and said, "You just cannot put that little girl through any more, it's just too bleak, there's too much misery." And so I saved the dog, and with hindsight I think it was the right thing to do.
When I'm writing I can often be quite disassociated from the impact of what I'm doing, so I kill a character and then a year later I might revisit that book and think, Oh crikey, that was mean.
And I quite like the thought of Norman being a bit wonky afterwards with his one eye. He didn't really deserve to die.
Also you get so much stick from readers when you kill a dog, you would not believe. I killed a dog in Ship of Brides and I still receive occasional letters from people who are cross with me about it. You have to be very careful what you do with your animal characters.
BNR: More so than human characters?
JM: Absolutely. The only human character who readers have ever contacted me crossly about is Will. Every other character I've killed and I've probably lost at least one character in every book nobody batted an eyelid. Kill a dog or a horse, though, and people are furious with you for a very long time. One woman even wrote to me to tell me she would never read another one of my books, because of what I did to the dog in Ship of Brides. Which I thought was quite strong. [Laughs]
I thought it was strange until I read Donna Tartt's The Goldfinch, and about two-thirds of the way through I realized that I was morbidly obsessed by the fate of the little dog, and I wasn't sure that I could keep on reading, because the thought of something happening to it was just too upsetting. Then it made me laugh because I realized I am just as bad as all those people who had written to me and that's the joy of literature, you know? You make people care about things that don't exist except in their imagination.
BNR: You've also written about "Chick Lit" and how it is used as a derogatory term. Why does this perception exist?
JM: Some of it is down to packaging. I think a lot of women's fiction is packaged as if it is infantilized, you know? It can look very childlike, like it's pitched at fourteen-year-old girls rather than thirty-four-year-old women, so I think that might be behind some of it. But, you know, a lot of the people who dismiss "Chick Lit" tend to be people who've never read it.
I would defy anyone who has read Marian Keyes, say, on depression or domestic abuse or Lisa Jewell on the complexities of relationships to say that these women are doing work of any less value than any of the male commercial fiction that is out there at the moment.
I just dislike it in a knee-jerk way. It feels like a pejorative term to me.
BNR: Do you feel like your books are not specifically for men or for women?
JM: Yes, one of the great joys for me since the advent of the e-reader is that I have had so many more male readers, simply because they're not put off by the cover.
There's no pink cover to be embarrassed about on the tube or something, so the number of men getting in touch to say they like the books has gone up hugely, and I'm really grateful for that, because most men just like a good story, like women do.
I ended up writing the transcript of my telephone conversation with Jojo in an airport bar, waiting for a flight that was delayed until after midnight. As the bar emptied I glanced at my copy of After You, and remembered Lou and her job in the Irish Pub in the London Airport, waiting for her life to lift off the ground. H.W.
October 26, 2015