Dawn Patrol

Dawn Patrol

by Tami Veldura

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Product Details

BN ID: 2940161695852
Publisher: Oldewolf Alternascents
Publication date: 07/28/2017
Series: Tidewater , #1
Sold by: Barnes & Noble
Format: NOOK Book
File size: 5 MB

About the Author

Tami Veldura is an aro/ace author of queer fiction. Her pronouns are she/her/Mx. She loves romance, fantasy, science fiction, and paranormal stories that push genre limits. She lives in California where she writes full-time which means procrastinating as often as possible with video games. Dragons fascinate her, a consistent schedule eludes her, and she makes a terrible housewife, just ask Mr. Veldura.
As S.T.Lynn, she writes uplifting, sweet, and tropey fantasy fiction, featuring women font and center. Including fairy tales, elves, magic, and happy endings for young adults and young-at-heart.

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Dawn Patrol (Tidewater, #1) 4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 1 reviews.
ravenwolf_EPTX More than 1 year ago
A Prequel at Best. Too Short to Connect To. ✩ ✩ ✩ ✩ THREE & 1/2 - STAR ✩ REVIEW ✩ ✩ ✩ ✩ > > Judging a Book by it's Cover > Looking Deeper Third-person The artist and the surfer. The surfer, Elias, wants to capture the magic that he feels when he rides the waves with the dolphin pod every morning at sunrise. The artist, Theo, is invited out to experience it first-hand, but from his kayak and commissioned to do a full wall mural. There were no notable back stories or real character development here, it just jumped in with both feet. This is Elias and this is Theo, period. Elias contracted Theo. Theo was painting the mural. A heated glance was exchanged and *bam*, they were naked. Then they planned for repeats, the end. I would NOT call this a full story. It could possibly pass itself off as a prequel for a later book featuring the couple more fully. There was one secondary character and even he felt more like a filler piece instead of being a supporting cast member. Other than a few stolen glances, I did not feel any chemistry between the characters. While the dialogue was good and their interactions were alright, the plot was too thin and short to really provide a depth and connection. Conflicts were absent. Predictability was mild. The conclusion felt too abrupt and unfinished, barely even suggesting a HFN, let alone a HEA for the guys. Overall, I'd suggest adding another 100 pages or so to give the characters more depth and warmth. Allow their relationship to resonate with the reader. It was not terrible, it just needed... more. . Rating: [R] ~ Score: 3.575 ~ Stars: 3.5 stars, if I could. ========================== ⭐ ⭐ **** Disclosure of Material: I received a copy of this book from IndiGo Marketing and the Author/Publisher with the hope that I would voluntarily leave unbiased and unsolicited feedback. I was not asked, encouraged, or required to leave a review - nor was I compensated in any way. I am posting this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission's 16 CFR, Part 255: "Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising". ***** ⭐ ⭐