Time Killer

Time Killer

by Todd M. Thiede


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In the small city of Rockton, Illinois, someone is tired of waiting. He’s tired of standing in line at the grocery store and tired of waiting at the drive-through line. Now he’s doing something about it.

The first murder rocks the city. The entire Bjornson family—except the father, Stephen—has been brutally murdered, and the killer has left a message behind, written in the victim’s blood: Don’t Waste People’s Time. It’s a grizzly start for two young detectives who’ve just become partners. But Max Larkin and Jesse Fairlane put their personal distaste for each other aside and start concentrating on how to find the killer from striking again.

As they investigate the scene of the crime and interview Stephen at the hospital, the clues slowly begin to add up. Could this be a deranged killer who struck ten years ago and has now returned to the area? Before they can answer that question, another murder is reported, and Max and Jesse suddenly realize they have a serial killer on the loose.

But as they get closer to the truth, a past memory begins to haunt Max, one that might lead to a break in the case—or the end of his career.

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ISBN-13: 9781475972351
Publisher: iUniverse, Incorporated
Publication date: 01/25/2013
Pages: 204
Product dimensions: 6.00(w) x 9.00(h) x 0.43(d)

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By Todd M. Thiede

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Copyright © 2013 Todd M. Thiede
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ISBN: 978-1-4759-7235-1

Chapter One


Stephen Bjornson wakes up and tries to roll over towards his wife only to find he cannot move at all. His thinking feels slow and hazy as if he has been drugged. He opens his eyes slowly to see that the room is dark with only a small beam of light from the full moon breaking through the drapes. He had opened them earlier to make sure the front gate was shut. His son rarely remembers to shut the gate when he comes home for dinner from the neighbor's house. He surveys his room and continues to fight the fog in his brain as he can feel something is very wrong.

He tries to stay calm, but his mind and heart are racing. He slowly tries to raise each arm and finds that he is tied down to the bed with duct tape across his chest, torso, and legs. With his arm spinned to his sides, all he can do is turn his head far enough to the leftto see that his wife, Gwen, is still there, but she is also taped to the bed. Mr. Bjornson notices Gwen has tape over her mouth. Her brown eyes are wide and look very dark in the moonlit room. Her hair is splayed out and crowns her head like a halo. At first, Stephen thinks he must be dreaming. He can't imagine why he would be tied to his bed and his angel, Gwen, tied next to him. Then, he shakes his head as nothing is making sense. He closes his eyes and reopens them. He focuses on Gwen and realizes that the halo was created by her messy blonde hair as she struggled to break free from the bonds. She keeps sweeping her gaze away from him to stare towards the foot of the bed and Stephen slowly focuses his gaze on the shape of a person behind the footboard. He is terrified at the thought of some stranger in their house. However, he is having a hard time maintaining focus on any one thought.

Stephen starts to remember the early days of their marriage when they fought over silly things like furniture. He and Gwen had spent three months shopping for bedroom sets, picking at each other's tastes for traditional or modern furniture. The young couple had taken almost every Saturday to go shopping to fill their home. Giddy and in love, their fights never lasted long and often ended in the bed. In hindsight, maybe that was why they had been so careful in their choices. Stephen wishes their lives could be that easy now – just make love to end an argument. He is not able to remember the last time he and Gwen had made time for intimacy. He keeps thinking that now isn't the time for memories – like having a daydream at work – but he can't think about what is more important than remembering the good times with Gwen.

He feels a bouncing sensation next to him on the bed and wakes from his drug-induced reverie. Gwen is bouncing her head and moaning beneath the tape. She keeps staring at him and then throwing her head towards the foot of the bed. He remembers that there is a person standing over him and his wife, just staring across the bed at them, waiting for him to wake up. Stephen vaguely wonders how Gwen can be so awake when he is so tired.

He tries to swallow, but his tongue feels like lead. His mouth feels like it is full of cotton. After a few tries, he squeaks out, "Who are you? What do you want?" He is disappointed in the quiver of his voice so he tries again, hoping to sound more intimidating. "Who do you think you are, coming into my house? What do you want from us? We don't keep large sums of cash in the house."

The man just stands there, staring down at Stephen and Gwen, not saying a word. Stephen thinks that it must be a man based on the wide shoulders and body shape. Besides, there is no way a woman would do this, he thinks. This man is wearing a dark ski mask. He is also wearing black leather gloves, which particularly frightens Stephen. He has watched enough forensic shows to know that gloves can make identification of criminals much harder. As he begins to become more aware and able to focus, he sees that the man seems to be very well dressed, wearing an expensive suit, button-down shirt, and tie. The ski mask and leather gloves clash against the business attire and Stephen starts to wonder who would dress so nicely to commit a crime. He feels like he is going to drift off again so he shakes his head and tries to maintain focus on the intruder.

Just when it seems like an eternity has passed since he first tried to roll over in his own bed, he jumps as the man yells, "You wasted my time!"

The voice is so loud and deep, that Stephen believes he feels the rumble through the floor into the bed. He jumps and his eyes open wide. He instantly tries to put on a brave face again and stares the man down. After all, this man is threatening his family. Then, he starts to worry if his kids will be woken up by this man. He doesn't want them to wake and see any of this. Writhing wildly against his bindings, they don't give. Fear raises his neck hair. This isn't a normal burglary.

He decides that he is getting nowhere and tries conversation, which is what he is best at anyways. "What are you talking about? Why are you doing this?" Mr. Bjornson says, his voice quivering. All he can do is lie there, thinking about his children just across the hall from him. He has no idea what this madman knows about his family and if he knows the kids are sleeping right across the hall. While he is very concerned for his and Gwen's safety, he closes his eyes and quickly asks God to protect his children from harm.

It seems like hours that the suited man continues to stand over them, but only minutes pass. Stephen is scared to speak more, worried that any noise will arouse the kids. Just when the angst is going to force Stephen to say something again the stranger finally speaks again, "You wasted my time ... Time is money!" Gwen had been fighting her restraints up until that second yell. She lays completely still except ratcheting her head towards Stephen. He looks back at her and can see the tears spilling from her eyes. The moonlight catches the tears just right that they remind him of his playtime with his daughter the other day when they blew bubbles in the backyard and the sunlight glistened off the bubbles in the air.

The man grabs a pen from the top of Stephen's dresser. He starts pacing back and forth in front of the bed, clicking the pen over and over again. CLICK! CLICK! CLICK! The clicks echo through Stephen's head and return him to the moment. The man continues to mumble, "You wasted my time ... you wasted my time ... you wasted my time." Gwen, still staring at Stephen nods towards the man. He understands that she expects him to do something, but he is at a loss. He cannot free himself so he focuses on what he can do – continue to try to talk his way out of this.

As he is trying to come up with a plan, the man finally kneels down next to the bed, pen still in hand. He leans over and says, "Stephen, is it okay if I call you Stephen?" Stephen nods his head in reluctant approval. Stephen starts thinking, how does this man know my name? Have I met him before? What does he want from me?

"Stephen, I know you and your type. You don't have a care in the world outside of you and your family's own little bubble. You don't think that your actions have any effect on other people's lives. You see, Stephen," he intones, "I once had a nice wife and a daughter just like you. We were happy, just like you; we had the perfect life, just like you. But you see, things are not always as they appear. Are they, Stephen?"

Stephen decides not to answer as he fears that the answer to the question is nothing that he wants to hear, particularly from some aggressive stranger. "Answer me!" the suited man shouts directly into Stephen's ear. Stephen shakes his head no. "You see, Stephen, my wife packed up all her things one day and decided she was taking my daughter away from me. It seemed that she was leaving me for another man. She said I was wasting her time. I couldn't provide her with what she needed. She needed financial stability and, even though I had a good job that kept us afloat, it wasn't enough. Stephen, it wasn't enough because, every so often, people like you waste my time and I don't make any money. People like you cost me money and you cost me my family." That comment was chilling. The man walks over to Gwen.

"Please don't hurt us!" says Stephen whimpering now, his bravado completely gone. "I love you, Gwen," he murmurs as he starts to sob. He turns his face away so that Gwen does not see him. He feels compelled to turn back as the man approaches his wife who, despite their distance, he loves dearly.

"Oh poor Stephen, poor, poor Stephen. You didn't tell him, did you, Gwen? I can call you Gwen, can't I?" Gwen nods her head reluctantly. She is between sobs because the bed is only shaking on Stephen's side. She starts fighting at her restraints again, trying to push away from the approaching masked man with her feet, trying to dig her heels in. The tape keeps her from being able to arch her body high enough to move towards the head of the bed. Stephen is sick, watching her suffer this way and he starts to fight his restraints, too.

"You see, Stephen, ever since you and I met a month ago. I have been following you and your family, watching you and Gwen, little Billy and Sandy in your daily lives. Now, I haven't been able to watch you every day because I have a job and time is money, you know. Nonetheless, I have been watching all of you. And what I have learned from watching you is that you enjoy wasting people's time. Gwen here is not only wasting other people's time, she is also wasting your time, Stephen. You see, Stephen, your precious little Gwen is having an affair," he states matter of factly.

At those words, everyone in the room freezes. Stephen lays completely still, weighing whether there could be truth to the words of this madman. Gwen stops moving either because of his words or because the mask is now only inches from her face. She is staring into his eyes and cannot drop her gaze.

Stephen decides that whether it is true or not, this man is not their marriage counselor and has no right to intrude or reveal their issues like this. He musters up more courage and exclaims, "No, that's not true. I know my Gwennie loves me and would never do that!" The suited man now leans over and whispers into Gwen's ear, "Tell him, tell Stephen the truth! He deserves that at the very least. Tell him the truth now." What had started as a whisper has turned into a menacing hiss in her ear. She flinches as he says truth so loud that her eardrum hurt. Stephen watches, helpless, as his wife pulls her head as far away from the man's face as possible.

The masked man suddenly rips the duct tape from her mouth in one quick jerk. Gwen screams in pain and then throws her head towards Stephen. "It's not true, Stephen! I love you with all my heart and would never do that to you or our family!" She is crying again and Stephen is not sure who to believe. Why would a man break into his house and lie about this to him?

"Lies, lies, lies ... you are wasting my time again, Gwen. Now tell him the truth. Stop wasting my time. Stop it; stop it, stop it ... time is money!" he shouts and hits the bed next to her. "Tell him now!" Stephen is feeling impatient about what this man wants and worries about why his children haven't come in to see what is going on. He starts to fear the worst about their fate, but asking will only remind the man that they are close by.

Between sobs, Gwen begins to choke out her confession in a small pitiful wail. "Okay, it's true, Stephen. I met someone else. But I love you and I love our kids! You have to believe me, Stephen, I do love you." The silence hangs in the air, thick and palpable. Stephen feels a gulf widening between them – the woman he so desperately wanted to protect a minute ago has indeed betrayed him.

Stephen's eyes widen and he struggles against the tape. A slow look of realization comes across his face. His tears stop and his eyes start to narrow to slits. "So that's why you missed my work luncheon? Is that why you weren't there that day to pick up Billy from soccer practice? Have you been busy sleeping around?" Stephen's voice begins to roar, forgetting about anyone, but the two of them. "Who is it, Gwen? Who is he?" he yells, trying viciously to face her. He succeeds in partially turning his body towards her. The suited man steps back, folds his arms, and watches the argument as it progresses. A smile of accomplishment is visible in the mask's mouth opening. He seems proud that he caused the two of them to fight.

Gwen continues to cry and shake the bed. "I have been seeing David, one of the dad's from Sandy's daycare. I never loved him, Stephen. I just needed more than you have been giving me." With the last statement, her words sound hollow, as if she is wrung out and tired. Guilt creates an ugly mask of her face as she looks into Stephen's eyes.

The masked man takes advantage of her pause. "See, Stephen, do you see how she is wasting your time? It's just like you did to me last month when you wasted my time. Now, here's the difference between you and me. I am here to help you, Stephen; I am going to rid you of your problem so you are no longer wasting time with Gwen."

As soon as he finishes this statement, he begins clicking the pen again as if he is nervous. Stephen starts to fight his bonds again to stand between the masked man and his wife, who he knows he still loves. The masked man places his hand between Stephen and Gwen. Then he crawls on top of her, positioning himself so he is straddling Gwen and her body is between his legs. After the humiliation he has faced – being told by a total stranger that his wife is cheating – seeing him on top of her is too much for Stephen. He manages to get a leg free from the tape and starts kicking towards the man. However, the bed is wide and he just grazes his arm. He is waiting for the man to pull up her night gown and rape her, but that doesn't happen.

The man looks back and forth between the two, savoring her fear and his anger. He then thrusts the pen directly into Gwen's right eye. He jams it in so hard and so fast that she dies almost instantly from the pen penetrating the brain pan. Blood spatters everywhere and the suited man takes a few seconds to survey the results. Stephen can see the man's teeth in the mouth hole of the mask. His smile is demonic and growing. Vice grips of trauma lock his body. He feels numb. It is a blessing.

"Just like I said, Stephen, I am here to help you. I'm here to stop you from wasting everyone's time." The man stands up from the bed and walks around to Mr. Bjornson's side to sit next to him. He stops talking directly to Bjornson, but the husband can hear him mumbling, "You wasted my time, you wasted my time, time is money," over and over again.

Stephen, still lying there in shock, wakes up as if from a dream and starts to scream, "No, No. No. Why are you doing this to me? What did I do to deserve this?"

"Okay, Stephen, here is the situation: I'm going to need you to pay me for the time you took from me. After all, time is money. So for the time you took away from me last month, I figure you owe me $633. That would make us even for the three hours of my time you wasted. Heck, I won't even charge you for the time I just saved you by taking Gwen out of your life, consider that a gift from me to you," he says in a very calm business-like voice.

Stephen thinks he must have fallen back into a dream because this cannot be real. Money for the time he took from the suited man? Three hours? This was all about three measly hours of time? Where did he meet this guy? How did he waste three hours of his time? he keeps thinking.

"Where is my money, Stephen? I am going to have to start adding to the bill if you don't tell me where my $633 are. Time is money! You wouldn't want to waste any more of my time would you, Stephen?" the suited man asks angrily. Stephen shakes his head slowly, still not understanding.

As the man starts rifling through their things, Stephen finally comprehends he is looking for his money. He proceeds to tell him that his wallet is on his dresser in the corner of the room and that there should be enough to cover it. The suited man walks over to the dresser and grabs his wallet, takes out the money and counts it. "You only have $450 here, Stephen. Where is the rest of it? Quit wasting my time!" he screams.

"My ... my ... wife may ... have some money in her purse. It's in the closet ... probably on the floor," Stephen says, his voice choked.


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Time Killer 3.7 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 74 reviews.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
So, the killer is seeking revenge on poor unsuspecting folks for wasting his time...I feel mildly homicidal towards this book. It was a complete waste of my time. I am in avid reader and have never intentionally walked away from a book, but I completely gave up on this one 3/4 of the way through. The dialogue was the most troubling to me, as it was so unrealistic. Also, half thought out sub plots were hard to look past as they seemed like after thoughts. Do yourself a favor and don't bother with this one. I wish I could give less than one star on this one.
Danieldabear More than 1 year ago
This is an exceptional book. Todd has blown through the high standard he has set for himself.  As a retired cop he understandds how things work. However he has written a story that has a flow and can readily hold your intrest. The interplay between the two new partners and the horrific murder makes for a real rollar coster ride.. The characters are well developed and in a way it is like being in a ride along. There is a great twist at the end that Id did not see coming. You will enjoy c from front to back and be sad that it is done
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
If you like any reality in your crime mystery, stay away. Clearly someone watches too much CSI and thinks they understand police and investigative procedures. If even just basic attention to detail is important to you, you will be disappointed within the first five pages. To the author: do at least a little real world investigation into your subject matter before you try this again. And getting your friends to write misleading 5 star reviews, just not cool.
AGoddessofLiterature More than 1 year ago
Time is money. Wasted time is time that you could have been making money, but you weren't because your time was wasted instead. The person that cuts in front of you in traffic and then drives slowly. The person in line in front of you that takes forever to order. All are time wasters and can be annoying when you are in a hurry. Most people forget about the incidents by the end of the day. However most people aren't homicidal crackpots either, unlike the person in this story who not only doesn't forget these seemingly inconsequential moments of wasted time but decides to take it upon himself to rid the world of the people who are chronic time wasters. The plot has an interesting premise that you may think of the next time you are debating what to order and there are people waiting in line behind you. The detectives trying to catch the killer seem a bit slow though and they are supposedly the department's best and brightest, even I was several steps ahead of them before we are enlightened as to certain aspects of the story. In fact there is one clue the detective never catches on to that I'm sure was right in front of his face if he had bothered to look. At any rate, this was a decently fast-paced story that was incredibly hard to put down. Other than the frequent editing errors it was quite an enjoyable read.
Shelibell30 More than 1 year ago
It took me a little bit to read this book , but not because it was tough to read, but my little one kept interrupting! LOL! Had it been up to me, I would have never put it down! I really like the way Max and Jesse are together...it didn't go romantic, and I like that. I love how just when I thought I had it figured out, I was thrown for another loop! That kept it exciting, and that is important to me. Cannot wait for another Max Larkin book...and I will never again waste anyone's time ;)
KayleeeKS More than 1 year ago
Awesome book! Really interesting premise that I haven’t seen used anywhere before which is pretty rare. The formula is pretty generic, but there are interesting characters unlike any I’ve seen, and the author gives the story his own unique twist and flaire. I thought that the leads, Jesse and Max made a good team, and I liked how Max’s history came into play with the events of the current time. I also really liked how Mr. Thiede writes, it is very easy to follow and I could picture everything perfectly, like it was a movie. Hey, there’s an idea… Recommend for people who like stories about psychopaths and killers and murder mysteries.
ClaireBear74 More than 1 year ago
Loved it! I read this whole book in one night even though I had only planned on reading a few chapters before bed. It was a fast and easy read and sucked me in right from the beginning. There is a killer on the loose who is torturing and killing people who are wasting time and taking money in some cases (only exact amounts…not a penny more). At times because of the way it is written it seems like things are being “told” to us instead of being “Shown”, but it wasn’t that bad. I still felt like a part of the story and the action and thought the author did an excellent job with pacing and creating believable tension. I always wanted to know what would happen next and was happy with the ending (although it did feel a bit abrupt). Not sure if this is a series or will be, but I’d read more if it was.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
A very remedial and mediocre debut. This needs some serious rewriting. I applaud the author for trying to write a book but this was PAINFUL to read. There are some decent bones here but is nowhere near publishing ready.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Read this in one sitting, and, ordered all his other books. Enjoyed and recommend to all!!
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Clever plot and story line, but writing is stiff. Ending was anti-climatic. A skimmer.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Seriously the only book I've not been able to finish. I think my 9 year old daughter could put more coherent thoughts down on a piece of paper. It was painful, absolutely painful.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Time Killer was a fast and easy read and sucked me in from the beginning. Really relatable characters and story line. Loved It!!
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Todd is a truly great crime writer but with this one he has surpassed his own standards. As a retired cop and detective he knows how things work and how these terrible crimes get solved. This is one that you will want to read all at once. Try real hard not to as the genus is in the details. The writer developed his characters as only a master story teller can do. They have depth and a gritty realism. This story is like going on a detective ride along. The story flows beautifully. You will never get bored and the mind bending twist at the end I did not see coming. You will not be disappointed
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
As soon as you begin the opening page of this novel it grips you and hangs on tightly until the very last page. I don't usually read detective novels involving serial killers but this book has seriously made me reconsider my reading material. The evil mind of the killer Mike/Tom is realistic and filled with malevolent thoughts which draw the reader into his creepy world. The detectives investigating the murders are believable and engaging as we watch them piece the mystery together. The pace of the novel matches the desperation of the police as they close in on their killer, trying to prevent him striking again.The details of his crimes made me squirm but were totally necessary for the realism of this tale. You seriously won't regret purchasing this book; a great find
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
This book is one that will have you reeling, asking questions, and wanting to devour more. The story starts with a psycho killer who sneaks into a couple's home in the middle of the night and takes their lives. The only survivor of these murders is Mr.Bjornson, who is too stunned at the loss of his family to be of much help to Max, the detective assigned to this grisly murder case. As Max delves deeper into trying to understanding the psyche of this killer, he discovers that the killer has done this before in other Mid-western towns 10 and 25 years ago. Of the three known sets of murders, only Mr. Bjornson and a three year old boy ever made it out alive. The murder's motive and peculiar habits is what drives this story. He kills people who he feels as if they are wasting his time. He charges them money as compensation for the time they have wasted. The murder is getting more bold and brash, allowing his death count to keep piling up. The author allows us to know the actions of the killer but still keeps him enough of a secret that we are unsure of what he will do next. This is an awesome, thrilling read. This book is not a waste of your time
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
A brilliant crime thriller. When Stephen Bjornson wakes up drowsy and unable to move, he knows something is terribly wrong, but the nightmare has only just begun... Soon his family are dead and Rockton Illinois has a killer on the loose. Detective Max Larkin works alone, so he’s not impressed when he is teamed up with rookie detective and local girl Jesse Fairlane. However, before long a strong partnership develops as they try to capture the grizzly murderer. The motive quickly becomes apparent, the victims have wasted the murderer’s time and he doesn’t like time wasters! Confirmation of this is written in their blood at the crime scenes, but he never makes a mistake and leaves no clues. As the death toll rises, the young detectives discover the murderer has struck before, and their partnerships tested in unimaginable ways as they try to find a lead. Will they discover who the serial killer is? Why does time wasting anger him so? I couldn’t put this book down, and would thoroughly recommend it. The storyline is brilliant and there are some great twists.
MichaelBeas More than 1 year ago
A gripping thrill ride that will keep your eyes glued to your reading device.  This amazing storyline takes off from the very beginning and does not stop until the very end. Author Todd M. Thiede in his novel “Time Killer,” presents an original plot that will keep you on edge the entire time.  The story starts off with Stephen waking up alongside his wife only to be surprised that they are both bound and gagged. If that is not enough to get your attention try adding the fact that the masked killer is in the room and waiting to do his dirty work. Stephen’s wife is butchered and two policemen begin what would be a long investigation of not just this killing, but many more that begin to occur. Words that best describe this book are: Thrilling, Mysterious, Suspenseful, Original, Gripping and Captivating in all the right ways.   Highly recommended and cant wait to read more from Author Todd M. Thiede. 5 Stars! 
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Another brilliantly written book form this much loved Max Larkin Detective Series. This story is one of a kind, but true to life in many cases. A big hat-tip to Todd for creating this piece of brilliance so we can all dive into a classic even before it is recognized as a classic.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
I love to read a good thriller, be it crime or political, and Todd M. Thiede has now joined my list of the top crime writers. This is mainly because this book offers quite a change from the same old, sale old of other crime fiction, which has, in my opinion, gotten a little stale and repetitive lately. This book is also very well written and the language is so gripping it pulls you right into the story. I could really feel Stephen Bjornson's panic in the first chapter! I also liked the basic idea that the killer is out to get "Time Wasters." In this day and age we're all in such a rush all the time that we forget how to just be and relax. This book's premise touched on the absurdity of that and when I find extras like that in a genre book it just makes the book that much better in my eyes. I highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys a well-written crime thriller with depth.
Bill_Nelson More than 1 year ago
 Leaves you Breathless Compelling story! At times, this book takes you roughly through the ringer, it shakes you, questions you and throws you against the wall. It is violent, thrilling and fast. The author has crafted a powerful murder mystery that wallows in the grit. And Larkin (the cop) is a hard, tough and fantastic character who I hope appears in many books to come!
MayElizabethTrump More than 1 year ago
A completely absorbing murder story. An action packed thriller. Fast paced and spell binding. A completely absorbing murder story. Great characters and an original twist on the crime thriller genre.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
The descriptions by the author in TIME KILLER grab your emotions. I can feel the different struggles that each character faces. The characters are well developed and the plot captivating. Overall a quick read. Max Larkin forces that compulsion to root for the mystery to be solved.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Time Killer of a book! I like how the author's writing style is very dialogue oriented, like how real people in the world really talk. The premise of the book is quite interesting, a serial killer who really dislikes time wasted. He doesn't like his time wasted and doesn't like anyone else wasting time in general. The authentic writing style lends credibility to how a story unfolds in the real world. A great book for the general audience. I highly doubt the author was trying to entertain police and investigative experts or those who live in a literary world.
BooksRMagicVR More than 1 year ago
Someone is angry that people are wasting his time.  And his punishment is losing their life.  And two detectives - Max and Jesse - are on the case.  And they don't like partnered with each other.  And the case is more serious than they thought.  The killer don't leave any clues, except writing a message about not to waste time with the victim's blood.  With their indifferences, are the detectives going to find the killer?  As the killings seems to be a long time happening, where is this all going to end? The concept is good.  And that's what made me pick this book.  The crime scenes are well described.  All the gory details are well brought out which added up to the horror and thrill of the plot.  The plot following the killer is one major plus of this novel.  His criminal thinking and killing methods are new and although it looks bad to say it, I enjoyed those parts. The detectives, the climax and the dialogues are the major flaws of this novel.  The characters of the detectives felt forced, and not something I can just go on with.  In spite of the editing problems, I thought of enjoying the novel, but the dialogues are still a major letdown.  And then the climax.  Actually there is nothing wrong with the climax, but the thrill is lost towards the end as everything is laid out on the table just like that. Verdict: For a debut, this is a decent crime thriller!   3 STARS!
Logan_Nance More than 1 year ago
Todd Thiele’s book Time Killer is an edge of your seat thriller about a man who has made it his mission to rid the world of the people that personally wasted his time. I have to tell you, when I first read the premise of the book, it intrigued me, because a lot of murder mysteries are just retreads of an old story with a new paint job, but not Time Killer. Todd drops you in the middle of the first murder and keeps the story rolling from there. And the two detectives are written just like something that I seem to be seeing on most of the cop shows I watch. A grizzled veteran gets teamed up with a new kid and they have to overcome their prejudices and preconceived notions about each other and work together to solve the murders before it is too late. I was definitely glad to see that this book was subtitled Max Larkin Mystery #1, as I look forward to future stories between the two of them. The plot was another thing: I, for one, could not figure out who the killer was until he was “revealed” and he explained what his motive for doing the deed was. Todd’s writing style is one that will keep you guessing and even after the killer is revealed, he will keep you reading until the final page with the twists he puts in. The only bad part of the book is the language. There is a good bit of profanity in it, and I think that may have deterred me from giving this a perfect score. All things considered, this is a very well written story, Todd, and I look forward to the next one.